RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > New Release Songs
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 10-24-03, 05:33 AM   #1
Writeous
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
Sunrise (The Morning) - My First Solo Track in Three Years

IP: AAA4 CB0B

Yep, its been about three years since I made a full solo track :-/. Enjoy... *edit* Soundclick is working now.

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=643822&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=643822&q=Hi

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=643822

I did so many takes of this that I kind of lost my voice(which damn near always seems to happen to me), so I didnt pronounce shit as well. So here are the lyrics for you.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/Lyr...9&songid=643822
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-03, 03:37 PM   #2
TheWholeTruth
New to RB
 
TheWholeTruth's Avatar
 
Posts: 64
Joined: Jun 2003
From: South Minneapolis
Status: Offline
Text Record: 5-1
Audio Record: 2-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 736F 5A0F

yo...this shit is dope as fuck..love the beat..who made it? ya flow is rippin this track man...im lovin ya lyrical content...for this bein ya first track in 3 years...its dope...im fellin the hook...this is one of the better things i've heard on this site...mad props man..this shit is mad nice...


.peace.
__________________
x~X~x..ThEwHoLeTrUtH..x~X~x

  Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-03, 09:18 PM   #3
Writeous
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: B209 B6B6

^^^ Thanks for the props, I really appreciate it. Its not the first track I've done in three years though, but just the first full solo. I usually do nothing but collabs or one minute songs with no hooks :-/ .
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-24-03, 11:18 PM   #4
3rd Inf
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 2BA4 A90A

this shit is hot only a few words that werent that clear but i liekd this
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-25-03, 07:29 AM   #5
Orikle
.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
 
Orikle's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,167
Joined: Mar 2003
From: Sydney
Status: Offline
Text Record: 11-5
Audio Record: 2-2
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 932A D079

Fucking like WOAH! That Beat Is Mashin Then you laced it dope as fuck with everything man..I reckon ya delivery was pretty much straight on..no different to what we used to for real..Lyricism ill as ever...That Hook is fucken Top Shelf hahah got me bouncin hahaha...Fucken iLL Man for real..Where the Fucks that CD!? Haha...Good On ya Mun...Pz...
__________________
<center></center><center>Click Here.</center>
Send a message via AIM to Orikle Send a message via Yahoo to Orikle   Reply With Quote
Old 10-25-03, 07:55 AM   #6
BuryMore
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 8045 17C8

i didnt even notice you losing your voice

this shit was str8 dope

nothing more to say

you killed it
you knowww this
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-25-03, 11:51 PM   #7
Dope Wax
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 6A58 1E50

Hook was good.. Nice song to just relax too.. It's all happy feel good.. I could understand everything perfectly didn't need the lyrics..

Should post more stuff like this.
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-27-03, 06:18 PM   #8
BlissK22K
Registered User
 
BlissK22K's Avatar
 
Posts: 174
Joined: Jun 2003
From: Seattle
Status: Offline
Text Record: 4-3
Audio Record: 4-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 8F25 FB35

Yep, Yep, Yeeeeeeees, some more tight shit. i was startin to wonder about this site but the last 5 or 6 drops i checked have been tight and this is one of the tightest i've heard on here. Good shit. Good vocab display along with an individuality to your flow. You rode the beat nice. I thought the hook could have been better but that's just me bein picky this was quality shit, wanted to give you some constructive critisism too so you can think about some shit to get even tighter. This drop was upper level!!!!
Send a message via Yahoo to BlissK22K   Reply With Quote
Old 10-29-03, 07:53 AM   #9
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
menolin's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,122
Joined: Sep 2003
From: UK
Status: Offline
IP: B89D 4D65

this shit is ill as fuck, if u'd bin puttin joints like this out for last 3 years u'd be a legend.

nice drop, everything was on point, not much bad to say about this shit


pce
__________________
<center><img src=http://www.rhymevantage.com/forum/attachment.php?s=&postid=6921=1 border=0></center>
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-29-03, 10:52 AM   #10
Kost
Fern Gully
 
Kost's Avatar
 
Posts: 811
Joined: Dec 2002
Status: Offline
IP: 88F4 75D2

hottest shit ive heard on hear in a while

feelin the style alot

lyric content is hot

nice hook

crazy ass beat

im jus feelin this track
__________________
Knum-Sayins???

Keepin It Real Dumb


The Creation
We Dont Need A Fuckin Crew Forum!
Kost
Send a message via AIM to Kost   Reply With Quote
Old 10-31-03, 02:44 AM   #11
Writeous
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 45B8 F4DC

Thanks for the replies yall...
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-12-03, 05:33 PM   #12
xHellEvatioNx
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 6575 8C04

that is one of the most ill underground tracks i heard.. tight ass beat... fuckin ill... get at me if you wanna collab wit a wack 13 year old white kid from ohio... peace out
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-13-03, 12:25 AM   #13
billy
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: BAE7 47E2

dope..........beat is nice and chill, flow went perfect with the track...

you got a sick ass rhyme scheme.........

like i said dope shit man............
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-13-03, 04:16 PM   #14
Syntax Mastery
Fucking Genius
 
Posts: 618
Joined: Feb 2002
From: Georgia
Status: Offline
IP: 586A 10A1

this is aiight man... im not feelin as much as everyone else i guess...

i like the beat, but its somethin about your delivery that just makes me feel like your reading...

still pretty mic nonetheless...
__________________
Admin of RB
Send a message via AIM to Syntax Mastery Send a message via Yahoo to Syntax Mastery   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:37 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.