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u first
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go ahead

hey man ill post my verse tommorow u can post yours today though see ya................................................ ........................

okay, but i'm gonna have to post mine tomorrow, too, sorry, but i had some seriously screwed up technical difficulties. okee dooo, toodle-loo.


nny

okay, but i'm gonna have to post mine tomorrow, too, sorry, but i had some seriously screwed up technical difficulties. okee dooo, toodle-loo.


ps: it'll be posted at 1:30pm (EST) sharp.

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i'm the J to the O-H-N,N,Y
an if i fail at a rhyme, then again i'll try
but if i try to hide behind mah blind mind
it'd shatter and clatter, just becuz i'm
scizophrenic, but don't panic, just understand that i'll land it
in this land of hip-hop, an i need no1 to handle it
my name is johnny c., an urs is onslaught
and johnny c. has got what onslaught has not
and though hiphop has got me insane, see
i be goin crazy, an made a nick-name for me
that nickname is nny, an it's the next thing you'll see
the next time you're allowed to go out 4 a CD!
an, oh by the way, i got a monopoly
i got a cop on me,
and yall got tah see
the rhymes that i make
an the times that you fake
bein' a rap artist cuz u know that it's great
so go to the gate
an tell hell tah wait
cuz yer another rapper, yer comin from in yer grave
i can't really think of nuthin else to say
so i'll end this wit a "fuck you," and a "have a nice day!"

um... i don't know if i need tah "check out", but if so, then i just did.. okay, ur turn ta tear dat shit up, onslaught! i'll check out yer verse later, dawg.

isnt that from 8 mile??? just wondering.........

Yeah that is from 8mile. I think we should tell Johnny C to change his name. Start callin yourself Lotto.

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

yea, it was, sorry bout that, but i just said the first thing that came to my head.............................................. ...................................... please find it in your heart(s) to forgive my involuntary act of stupidity. I'll never let it crappen again............... ok?

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im spectacular man i cant stop slappin ya
ill take your life away like count dracula
Johnny C. yous like a horror victim
paranoid bloating and runny nose is ya symtoms
onslaughts hot what u thinkin tryin to diss em
u got a mental illness ill take ya to the hospital
u with a win man that aint even possible
accordin to me man that aint even logical
this is complex like a game of chinese checkers
it takes two crew maybe even 3 to wreck-us


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flow..Onslaught-X
punches..Onslaught-X
vocab..Onslaught-X
personals..Onslaught-X

Overall.. Onslaught-X took this one easily

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