Done Too The Beat of Obie Trice - Hands on You (feat. Eminem)
The Chorus in this is sang the same way eminem sings it, wit different words. I'm pretty sure you'll be able to figure out what this is about. Check it out.

Verse

Standin there wit hands in hair I Cherish you,
I hope bein wit me in public wont emberass you,
You make my THINKIN HEAD more alert then ferries do,
Your the OTHER one and i think you SIGNIFICANT,
So join my world even though our views are different,
I don't have time for all these other dirty bitches,
If I'ma have ta fight for you just know that I'm Viscious,
Perhaps you could be my Present for Christmas,
But I gotta stop stallin and fuckin ask what ya wish is,
You the only chick in this shit town that don't smell like fishes,
I swear ta fucking god you wont be stuck at home wit the dishes,
I'ma worthy man without the dirty tan we was meant for each other,
We can become lovers I won't even Mention ya mother,
And ya dad hell hed probly beat me up leave me deeply cut,
But I'll Kill any motherfucker that has ever called u a sleepy slut,
This isn't a love song its tellin bout a desperate Groups,
Im in one now cause you said we be takin seperate routes,
Sometimes I wonder if you laughin it up while testin me,
I believe that WE bein together forever is destiny,

Chorus

This - Is - All - Your - Fault
You - In - A - Fucked Up - Cult
I - Trigger - My - Assault
Like - Gettin - Hit - Wit - Volts
Now - You've - Upset - Me
You - Aint - Even - Ready
Too - Keep - This - Shit - Steady
My - Conciense - Is - Deadly

Verse

I swear ta you I'm not just tryin to get some pussy,
We can Kiss Talk Watch TV or fuckin play footsies,
I dont even care If you boss me round or call me tootsie,
Me and you not together is the only thing that can push me,
It Seems you've pushed me and now im fallin down,
Wack faggets laughin at me n they all around,
This shit bout as funny as a fucking ballin clown,
Feel my fist in ya face fucka whos stallin now,
My lifes gone down the hole and I aint Givin-Shit,
This the mose fucked life and im Livin-It,
I hadda dream and I had to invision-it,
Feel like a soldier Thats just taken precision-hits,
This shit is deep and I could possibly drown,
Oh well fuck it.. whos the fuckin boss of me now,
You made so we never smile but often we frown,
You wanted sodomy hell I dont Believe in that,
You Jerked me around wit decievin facts,
Your fuckin WACK and you cant even rap,
Stupid Bitch got the "BOOBIES" but I'm leavin traps,

Chorus

This - Is - All - Your - Fault
You - In - A - Fucked Up - Cult
I - Trigger - My - Assault
Like - Gettin - Hit - Wit - Volts X2
Now - You've - Upset - Me
You - Aint - Even - Ready
Too - Keep - This - Shit - Steady
My - Conciense - Is - Deadly



Thats it... Go ahead and critique that... and if u up to it u can add a third verse if u really want too, but I just want some feedback.

humorous on topic fallowed a demented meaning and even added a chorus i think this with out a doubt is an ill ass peace i would like to here to the beat.

yeah thought you put this well, humoured me, not a bad drop, its always good to know the beat so you get the flow better, overall quite a nice piece!.......

can you hit this......
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=87520