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Old 11-13-03, 10:42 AM   #1
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A Spanish Verse (Dedicated to the rising stars in the forum)

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Yo no me creo y se que estoy feo//
Vale mas mi valor que un trofeo//
Todavia me falta aprender el vocabulario//
Este sitio es como un diario de documentos valiosos//
Cada palabra es enchufada como si fuera una plancha//
Quemando a raperos que se creen los meros meros//
Presumiendo su abilidad en un sitio que no vale la pena//
Saca tus mejores rimas y mira como te las chiflan//
Esta pajina de internet es un pasatiempo que no tomo serio//
Por que aqui algunes creen que van a ser raperos en verdad//
Aqui no te ases grande por que dejaste tus frases en libertad//
Wacha con los ladrones que copian sus canciones//
Son unos sin berguensas con cagada en sus calsones//
No son creativos con ellos mismos por eso roban frases sigido//
A mi me la pelan por que yo soy el chido//
Entro a la pagina sabiendo que lo hago por yo mismo//
Me vale coño lo que digan otros miembros, yo nada les pido//
Algunos me caen en la punta de la verga hablando chingaderas/
De mis rimas y mi estilo sin saber el pasado que yo eh vivido//
Los dejo pensando en estas palabras de otro lenguaje//
El que no sabe leer en español que no mame!
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Old 11-13-03, 10:44 AM   #2
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Dope. I Didnt Understand A Word Of it. But Dope.
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Old 11-13-03, 10:47 AM   #3
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fuck it, if you say so, but it has a message for them rappers or mc's out there critisizing as if they are fucking judge and shit.
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Old 11-13-03, 10:51 AM   #4
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uh cool i think.......
I myself do not believe and itself that am ugly// Is worth but my value that a trophy// Todavia lacks me to
learn the vocabulary// This place is like a valuable newspaper of documents// Each word is enchufada as if was
a plate// Burning rappers that the mere mere are believed// Presuming its abilidad in a place that does not be
worth while// Removes your better rhymes and sight as you whistle them// Thispajina of internet is a
pasatiempo that do not take serious// because aqui algunes believe that are going to be rappers in truth//
Aqui not you large aces because you left your phrases in liberty// Wacha with the thieves that copy its
songs// Are some without berguensas with cagada in its calsones// are Not creative with them same therefore
steal phrases sigido// TO my peel it me because I amThe chido// I Enter to the pagina knowing that I do it for
i// is worth Me coño what other members they say, I swims I ask them// Some fall in the tip of the verga
speaking chingaderas/ Of my rhymes and my style without knowing the past that I eh lived// The abandonment
thinking about these words of another language// The one that does not know to read in Spaniard that not mame!
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Old 11-13-03, 10:51 AM   #5
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i know taht translation sucks
but it gives at least an idea
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Old 11-13-03, 10:55 AM   #6
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thanks man, i appreciate your translation and let me tell you that you did a good job by translating it. i'll be checking your shit out.
Respect is what i have for you and anyone who helps out like you did dog.
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Old 11-13-03, 11:00 AM   #7
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well i didnt' translate it personally...i had some help...from a website...but im glad u liked it!
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Old 11-13-03, 11:08 AM   #8
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yeah that was cool

you did an aight job, but ur rhyme scheme...was ehh...
that doesnt matter tho...

hmm, the subject...is not too cool....sounds like shit talking, but ehh we all do it so coo...

yeah some...aight....i guess disses to people...
need some metas or similies....up ur complexity from just...rhyming...

keep at it homie, good job...
i'll edit my repy later with a better response....~1~
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Old 11-13-03, 12:02 PM   #9
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for shure man, i understand your views. it is a shit talking verse to them m.c's that judge you by the work of art you create.
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