Topical Battle subject will be on Life, I wont drop untill you check in I know that you have to wait until tomorrow probably just check in and I dont care about who drops first.

Checkin in formulatin right now---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

your original rules said 10-15lines so I am tryin to stick to that:


Don't wanna ~wake-up~ when my days a "nightmare"
Reality ~breaks-up~ insanity surounds me "right-here"
I ~take-up~ my cross that I gotta "bare"
how do I get through this Life when no one else even seems to "Care"

Lifes lookin hard, like thugs sportin "Goatee's"
and Im drownin like a fat kid wearin pool "floaties"
this aint a battle its a spiritual "war"
gettin by like Carsons mom usin crisco to get through the "door"

Im the first cat to preach about peace and "love"
yet I left bloody prints all over the "gun"
Im not "dumb" but my sin has got me so "strung"
I know Im "young" but Is my lifes over before its "begun"

Can I make it wit everything Im "givin"
Life without Christ just aint worth "Livin"

-one-

Carson dont sleep on this dawg-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

lol@westpalmbeach lmao lmao

but neways, verse cud b better and dont quote your words, there is no need for that, makes it look really dumb n noobish(no offense)

thanks for ya opinion Legend (in yo own mind)----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------