he 4got to put a poll in da other thread...so VOTE HERE!!!

skitten verse=
you think you running like you stealing my purse
i keep my rhymes in there so you can cheat your verse
but i'll punch you in da face and it hurts
when you hold your nose
then when i take a stab at your stomach, wait for the herse
because you know you worse
i hate the way you curse
will you be a fucking pussy in the demo you make
or will you write down each verse you take
just wait until your wake
i'll go into your pockets and a smile i'll fake
i'll show the public the cheating you did
when i show them that crumpled up piece a paper
the words you shitted make you looked even faker


new rap order verse=
i'll have skitten skippen after i erace his chest /
and have him limpen after i spray his legs /
u still wouldent "see me" if u had eight eyes /
put a four-four to ya forehead and make u hate-life /
niggaz like u leave my battles lookin like sleepy hollow /
told you not to follow...hit u wit the hard combo's /
i have the sickest method /
put a verse to ya bones and hav em fallin in seconds /
leave them in a way sceintist gona be studying for years /
you aint at my level bitch...N u still aint no where near /
you still a boy...cant play wit the big toys /
n-r-o is one dangerous hazard to avoid /


VOTE NOW...5 VOTE WIN

opener:skitten
closer:skitten
strucure:tie
punches:tie
wordplay:NRO
overall:skitten


NRO u had sum gud concepts, but didnt quite pull off the punches, skitten, same,
both y'all need to elevate a lil

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