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Old 10-29-03, 12:30 AM   #1
Verbatim
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Friends Again?

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I can't pretend, that i don't wanna be friends
because i really do, so lets try this again
forgive me, for what i've said in the past
and lets try to make a friendship last
i don't wanna fight no more, i just wanna be "cool"
like when we weren't dating, but still friends at school
why can't we go back to that, is it to late for that?
can we ever have that friendship back?
but this decision is totally up to you
tell ya the truth, i do miss talkin to you

i know this is alot to ask
but anyway
bye

no need to up this
peace
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Old 10-29-03, 02:22 AM   #2
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very simple...maybe you should say this to that
special girl because whats the use of thinking
about it over and over to eat away at you...
just do it like nike probe into her psyche
to find out if she likes me...hmm..no likes you
prove to her that your the right dude to treat
her well and make her life new...go out upon
that limb to like..prove..and show your love
for that dime that girl that love your world
that pearl theres no need to come across as
a thug for the simple fact that its not appealing
just be your fuckin self homie she just might let
some secrets start revealing...she might still like you

this wasnt bad
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Old 10-29-03, 02:24 PM   #3
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WELL IT HAS 2 DO WITH AN X GIRLFRIEND OR MAYBE JUST A FRIEND
IT WAS A GOOD POEM
IT MAKES YOU THINK ABOUT YER OWN RELATIONSHIPS AND HOW YOU CAN INPROVE THEM
THE LINE I NO THIS IS A LOT 2 ASK BUT ANY WAY BYE WAS THE MOST CAPTURING TO ME
IT TELLS ME THAT YOU WANT TO BE WITH HER BUT THAT U CAN ALSO BE FREE
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Old 10-29-03, 02:26 PM   #4
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i don't wanna "like" her, just wanna be friends...
and i would tell her that, but what can ya do.....
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Old 10-29-03, 09:26 PM   #5
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and thanks for replies
by the way
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Old 11-01-03, 01:20 PM   #6
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short but good poem, very well writtin, a lot of emtion an bout this chick, dont swet it man, just give it time..pz
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