People think i'mma dick, cuz of the way i spit (what?)
always bringin emotions, and my people into my shit
it's not my fault, you bitches probly deserve it (yup)
my anger? there's just no way i can conserve it
always being dissed, pissed, never missed (true)
you wonder why i bring you bitches into this

ayo look

My rhymes will make you cry, make ya wanna die
slit your wirst, and wanna commit suicide
with a gak by my side, y'all think i'm livin a lie
i ain't tryin to be black, i'm just a plain white guy
gettin shit of my chest, doin what's best
don't give a damn, if you are impressed
take a look at my rhymes, swallow and digest
i ain't quite evil, but i'm half possessed
I'm a Demonic Discisple, not quite the devil
i'll elevate some more, then soon be at that level

when i spit i spit...don't give a shit
gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit
i'll always commit, and do it legit
gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit

Better watch your back when i'm near
cuz i'll stab ya, then dissapear
make you shed a tear, when i steal your career
when krem comes around, your better stand clear
cuz i'm ballistic realistic, just plain linguistic
go ahead and temp me, i'm sadistic
droppin rhymes, here there everywhere
next one could be bout you, so ya better prepare
writing rhymes just outta no where
come a knocking, and ya better beware

when i spit i spit...don't give a shit
gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit
i'll always commit, and do it legit
gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit

just somthing
uppin for feedback
peace

with a gak by my side, y'all think i'm livin a lie
i ain't tryin to be black, i'm just a plain white guy

that's wat i'm talkin about, enough of tha black racists, shit^^^

one problem: simple wit simple wordplay although there was some wordplay in it, jus keep elevatin...

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thanks
keep uppin with the feed back

uppin
for some replies

i agree simple but you got the point out in a catchy way that is enough to interest me so to me this is hot keep doing you i like this

that was good your vocab was prity good, i really liked ur concept

thanks y'all

keep uppin

Yo, good shit and I have to bandwagon on this one, just a little simple, but sometimes, that's how you have to keep shit to really lock that meaining in there. Good shit and I felt it...

yup...this was indeed simple...but to the point...you got ya message across really well just try to expand the vocab a lil' and add some multiez...but overall this was good...holla

^^^the vocab was good good though...it just could be better...

man... you usin a style similiar to mine so I was really feelin that shit... I like the concept and shit... me and you'd prolly make a good battle... but anyways man... kkeep that shit up homie..
A.T.

no doubt
thanks ya'll

keep uppin

uppin

feels like you tryna be eminem, but what eva :S its was aight, keep elevating bruv