[.:alliK:.]
you wasting yo time wit playin with yo scrotum and lovin yo wife/
you gotta stop this shit,cheat,kill,screw her with a fucking knife/
wait,I'll do it RUN FO YO FUCKING LIFES *shots*/
u don't like what I'm doin? fuck you...dead's coming/
gotta believe me on my word,nigga,I ain't frontin/
take a good last look at yo trunk cuz I'm The Omen's gunner/
you look like a coward, leavin like the fuckin roadrunner/
u're a faggot acting like the big man from the gutter/
u ain't gangsta,u're mommie's little boy wit a rich-ass father/
look, he's growin so big, it's so cute...NOT/
lets see how much shit u can talk wit ur face on the sidewalk like in american history x, saw the blood?/
oh yeah that's right you a homo, I bet u turned it off/
peeps like u are just too soft *gun gets cocked* heard that sound? that means my gun's cocked, you ready to get shot?/
imma pop a shell between yo eyes I don't give a fuck/
even the black eyed peas can't make me find love/
now it's a motherfuckin wrap *shot*...cut/
FUCK U!!!

[WORD~PERFECT]
BUT wait a minute it aint over-
Go ahead get behind the wheel of a car,
after you just drank yourself sober-
Leave the bar get in your land rover.
Make a sharp turn at a buck fifty till the wheels turn over.
Is it the guilt? or being afraid that after you killed?
Thinking about the time your buying in the asylum
For the case you just built?
its getting confusen and what about the illusions-
laughing at you passing the gun offering only one solutioun.
Go ahead and do it give them there retribution-
Let the revolve desolve the problem and solve
it just by usen-3 dead that’s 3 strikes your already loosen-
so this is life your deserving-and lucky if you serving-
cause you could get the death penalty dont you find that disturben?
Take another shot of the burben- cipher the gas from suburban-
Swallow it till your stomach starts turnen-
And once it starts churnen…..
vomit on your self strike a match and start burnen.
You recive what your earnen.
Its time to pay in full- don’t be a fool-
look he just purchased a whole tank of fuel.
Now your starting drool or is it swet thinking of the pool
you left behind how could you be that cruel?
She did nothing to you but you killed her too-
Don’t blame on me im just the voice inside of you.
You’re the one he racted and acted like some maniac spatten-
Ubsenities while the blood was splatten-
Think of…..hey pay me the attention-
Im in charge now I control your comprehention.
Your only hopen is to walk out into the open-
and let some car hit you praying your neck will get broken-
then tell the cops you were in HOBOKEN-and lost your token-
cry and start squirmen
so they feel guilty you know the time of death cant be determined.
Instead you let me take the blame but I was only joken
im not just a voice in your head-hello im satan your dead
fuck heaven your coming here instead.

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Ahhh shit... lmao...
this was like some eminem shit... lol
I liked tha style you both came with...
allik... put some more multies in your spit, and up your vocab
a lil...
word... I like you shit too... but every time I read your open
mics... i find misspelled words... lol/.///
anyways... way to rep da fam....
nice drop
~Ashy~

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thks pop uppin
this

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Allik i respect that you new here and you ain't really on point yet, but still word perfect comes stronger on this. altogether its a good collab 10/10

descent collab I like word perfect's part the best but you both did good and stayed on basically the same point. Allik's part reminded me of that one song off of Marshal mathers LP... umm... i think it was Kim.. jus the whole style seemed alot alike..

Anyways you guys should redo the fav and drop some feed on my latest No Love

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If ya get the chance Drop some Feedback on these drops:<br>
<a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=815041#post815041">I hate bitchs keystyle</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=85355">Aint no drug got a hold of me</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=88860">No Love</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=90057">Rules of the Game</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=92570">Dirty Hippie</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=92613">R.I.P Crossroads</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=92798">Learn about it</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=986562#post986562">Valet Parking [keystyle]</a>, <a href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=104102">Tribulations</a>.
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This shit was Tite Word-Perfects verse was Ill but ya both came strong to me Keep doing what you doing

thanx y'all...

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that wasa good piece, you both had some very great lines, flows were good, very creative, shudnt be a slept on piece, lates

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

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