ok this is a warm up after 6 months of resting now im bak

shootin sick six blistic tips//
shit flips niggaz causin espionage//
niggaz best get outta dodge//
12 to da chest an mommaz sayin a blessin//
im guessin da fukin lungs cave in//
tha heat from mi spit blazin//
engagin attack-werds,breakin niggaz bak-wards//
a heavy weight imma straight leviate to da top//
this anger got me bout pop//
imma never stop,never be profilin an posein//
straightin wilin im the chosen//
one to live da life//
cut mi own throat an survive//
i live ta see u die//
electifying the taser
laser beams spot the shot//
i poke smot to choke a blood clot//
i sit an spit as i plot more crazy wayz//
tha days pass downin another 40//
fuck this ish imma guzzle forumla 44d//
yea da tokin helps but da ua chokin//
da P O dies after gang rapin miss cleo//
but i still need to be a voodoo ritual//
niggaz peep me an place me under misfitable//
every thang i do is intentual//

Lol i get that last line, ok descent flow, no meaning thats why its just a warm up, text aint for you, you need a mic, when a good audio head writes stuff in text, it looks wack. But this had a few lines that looked descent. I think you should get your mic, and then start rippin up tha threads, but you def. need some elevation wid tha text part.
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thanks mayn u right i am better on audio u never know it happen u get hear me again soon u juss dont know maybe this weekend or so im hopin

TEXT MAYBE OFF BUT THE READ WAS GOOD I ENJOYED PEEPING THIS