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IP: 494D 26E7
Ima leave,ya bleedin/in da back of a jeep/peepin/for someone to smeel ur reekin/ since u cant scream/ cuz i ripped out ya teeth/ when
i found some tools in a creek/ ur ass is meat/ for carnavores like me/ ill take a bite in ya flesh 3 feet deep/ my rhymes r hotter then flannel pants in a texas summer/ u rap again ill bury u six feet under/ im like marciano bitch, im whiter then white/ and i battle in a place where mosty black ppl fight/and im still stayin alive/ i stay awake n/ i strive/and only god knows why/ im still able to open my eyes/ and much to yall's suprize/ ive come to realize/ just y my rap can never die/ its cuz either will i/ill keep spittin till age of 95/ and nothing will change cuz its now my time/ to shine/ in the lime light like mr./ 5 dimes/ this game is corrupt/ but its my time to errupt/ like a volcano, all i do is blow ya life up/ cause so much damage i leave ur ass bankrupt/ and im hotter then a skillet on the stoved heated up/ and 50 is the bacon ive been re-cookin up/ i cooked his ass once, guess it wasnt enough/plus hes a pig, proved that last battle/ talkin bout cummin on my face, when really..he spakkles/ i dont believe in the law/ like im steven sigaul/ n im cold enough n hot enough to freeze n unthaugh/ all i do is appaule/ n make whack rappers fall/ like autumn, n time changes us all/ ill leave u brain dead/ in the head/ and keep tellin u what to do like "Man"(I) say/ and put the rest/ of ur whack crew under arrest/ for lyrical distress/ and makin a mess/ any comments |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
like i said in the tryouts in the whole its an ok drop, but there just isn't any complexity to it, the rhyming scheme is just way to simple, and your structure needs work...........peace!
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