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I have been broken
IP: F6E0 2940
This is something really deep and please don't sleep on this. I'm going through something really big right now and I would like to hear from everyone. I haven't asked for much beofre but now i ask to not sleep. thanks JT
This man this beast, So large and dangerous, Giant of the world has been defeated, by what you wounder and yell and ask, defeated by his own emotions, The pain and past has returned, and ripped a sound heart back into havic, remember the dead and how they died, membering the connection i had with them, and how so quickly it was taken from me, right now i'm broken and can not speak, tears run down my cheeks and I can't stop, all at once it's rushing through my mind, have have been broken and i'm so alone, in this unstable ball i'm in, i feel i can't last, just want to be at peace with my loved ones, just want to see them once again, I slip deeper and deeper into depression, can't get up and or out, so deep so scared and so alone, please help me from this what i'm in, i haven't cried like this for years, and now it has broken me once again, everything all built up came all at once, and crushed this undeatable giant, and what has done it were these emotions, keyboard full of tears and heart in so much pain, why? why did you have to die, I know it was in vein, and i sit here so sad confused and broken, because these emotions have ripped me apart, and opened a hole to the past................, why it came now, i now know so well, today was a birthday or the creator of my mom, one of the ones who started it all, my grandfather, may you all rest in peace and be happy once again, I love you and i'll try and stay strong, your deaths have gotten to me deeper than before, now i feel how much I really miss you all, this family is depleting and anyone can be next, i have been destroyed becasue of how i feel, my emotions have broken me into tiny little peices............. I went through an emotion break down and this was my way to vent it all out and get it all out of my system. I have mood swings like girls and kinda dropped down and now i'm better. I would still like to hear from you all. Thanks JT Last edited by Smooth JT : 11-07-03 at 08:34 AM. |
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IP: F718 7AAD
holy crap dude. that is one deep poem. i have lost loved ones close to me to and i know how you feel jt. great piece man. keep droppin. respect
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IP: F718 7AAD
it was deep, death is by no question tha greatest release of all of one's emotions, this comin from a man who has lost more people than i've ever kept close at one time, and that pain that i feel everytime i think of one of them i've lost was easily expressed here...
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IP: C1DA C961
Great drop JT. This was very deep and believe me it touched me. Hit me right in the heart. This is somethin that I can totally relate to. Presently, one of my best friends is in a coma in the hospital and theres not much of a chance that she will come out, and im goin throu something almost exact to this, wit no one that knows. Dude, the worst possible thing on earth to go through is the loss of a loved one. Believe me, I've gone through enough of it, hence the name... There was a lot of emotion expressed here, and death does that. Structure and vocab and wording dont mean anything in this type of drop. This is somethin from the heart. And believe me it was felt. Anyone who has lost someone goes through this. But just keep up, and u'll be iight. Just takes time and friends. Most respect.
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