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11-05-03, 12:11 AM | #2 | |||||||
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dont sleep
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11-05-03, 07:36 AM | #3 | |||||||
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jus wonderin
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11-06-03, 01:39 AM | #4 | |||||||
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ok..this aint fair, i've always peeped other ppls music wtf is up wit dat?
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11-06-03, 04:55 AM | #5 | |||||||
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Yo this just isn't that tight to me. Sounds like some old school Vanilla Ice. Delivery is just bad, lyrics need a lotta work. Just feedin back. Positive: You were on beat for the whole cut. Seems like you tryin ta sound hard and aren't pullin it off. My suggestion, slow down yer delivery a lil' bit, work on some harder lyrics and work on your mic presence...don't think i'm talkin shit, i wouldn't have gave any feedback but no one else was, so hopefully you can take this the right way and work on gettin tighter...1
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11-06-03, 08:59 AM | #6 | ||||||
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bitches sleep......... anyways sounds not so good...... work on your flow DRASTICALLY.. althought your beats arent half bad.
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