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Old 10-28-03, 04:18 AM   #1
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Yo Im a Viscous Mic And Own Winnin Rights To Many Battle Fights
I Rob Emcees of their 'Talent' Daily Cept i Follow My father Christ
Lust Afta many things That Let me Loose but they call Me Tight
Im Smarta and Harda Than any Harvard Law Partner
Idiots Think This is A Buy'n'Sell but this is a Open Barder
Any one For Some Sick Rhymes? Ya you there in Front
But Reality is if It aint Sicker Than Mutated Flu's Than "It aint Shit Cunt"
If any Fagot Comes at me Like that he gonna get Bitched Up
Cut Ya Dick Off with a Mc'Donalds Nife', Sausage Egg Mcmuffin With Ketch-Up
Even Knight Couldnt "Rise" again Afta that Massacre
Never Step to a MC that could put u into a battle hertz
Slash Me, Bitch Step? Cut ya Feet off with ya shoes Still Intact
I Crack Ya Skull and let ya brain fluids seep ya Well Known Facts


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Old 10-28-03, 07:38 PM   #2
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upppin feed back.
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Old 10-28-03, 11:12 PM   #3
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uppin feed back.2.
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Old 10-30-03, 02:33 AM   #4
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I guess im that bad
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Old 10-30-03, 07:32 PM   #5
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fuck no dawg dat shit is tight,

1-5's
wordplay-5
flow-4 (lil hard ro follow)
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killer lines-rite of da chart 10 dawg
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Old 10-30-03, 07:33 PM   #6
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member, keep it crackin cuz. Peace out (\1/)
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Old 10-30-03, 07:51 PM   #7
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yeah this was a good read, very nice use of multis, and it just flowed off the tongue, and a good use of vocab, ....keep doin it

can you hit this plz....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88249
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Old 10-30-03, 09:59 PM   #8
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thanx for the feedback.
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Old 10-31-03, 08:05 PM   #9
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Upppin feed back. please.
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Old 10-31-03, 09:46 PM   #10
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i liked the 1st half but it fell off in the 2nd.
'I'M SMARTER AND HARDER THAN ANY HARVARD LAW PARTNER" was your tightest line in my opinion.
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Old 11-01-03, 08:35 AM   #11
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nice drop. you had multiple rhymes in one sentence. that's awsome.
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Old 11-01-03, 11:18 AM   #12
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I love shit like this. Everything about it was ill I like how in some of ya lines you rhyme through the whole line. Shit was tight keep droping shit like this
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Old 11-02-03, 01:51 AM   #13
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nice shit dawg nice shit
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Old 11-02-03, 01:56 AM   #14
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yo tight shit dawg hard out shit i liked it aiight dawg its awesome word play and rhyme scheme. Som tight shit dawg
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