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Old 11-05-03, 11:12 AM   #1
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"Hood & ME" Bangin Track.. drop some feedback and your links

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This is just my verse and hook but I will have a collab version and a solo version finished soon..
i laid back and just got this idea... tell me how ya like

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http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=669177&q=lo
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http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...?ID=669177&q=hi
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Old 11-05-03, 01:20 PM   #2
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ok..you are the second person i gotta yeall at for beating me to using this beat lol..ok..flow started a little off... then got better..delivery is good emotion wise for the most part...but you need to work on saying shit more clearly.. if you do that the accent or whatever you want to call it you have could be a bonus for you.. youve got a diiferent voice just enunciate better at some spots...overall cool shizzle man.. just a little bit to work on..ill check the finished version and such whens its done..peace

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Old 11-05-03, 07:18 PM   #3
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lmao^^ I got this beat too yo, and I neva used it yet either.
but this track's aight still yo, I'm feelin whatchu sayin, lyrics are nyce. flow is on point but I dunno how well this goes wit tha beat, not bad but could be betta you know.
anyways keep yo head up.
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Old 11-05-03, 08:50 PM   #4
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thanks for peepin the track peeps... I appreciate it... The full version will be up in a lil... but keeps This moving!!!
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Old 11-06-03, 09:06 AM   #5
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coo track.... um..... yea beat was ok..... practice
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89945
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Old 11-06-03, 08:27 PM   #6
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thx for peepin ill peep ur track in a min. postman thx
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Old 11-06-03, 08:53 PM   #7
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yo ithought it was pretty dope tha beginning was kinda choppy tho
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