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Masta C:
Lately things have been hectic, and im starting to wreck shit…
Cause its driving me crazy, and im giving everyone my best hit…
But it does not work, and makes me feel more like Im a jerk…
So I go lurk, with a smirk, and gets nothing but more berserk…
Feels like I cant go on, I get nothing, cause I have no brawns..
And so on, I cant keep up with things cause my flows gone…
With all these things they are bending me, and no ones lending me..
A helping hand, sooner or later these things will be ending me…
Some things are just to much to handle, I just cant deal with it..
I wish everything I could dismantle, cause I feel like a real misfit..
Nothings the same, every things changed, just wished it was a game..
Cause then I could stop in a happy frame, and my name, brings shame..
So much pressure to do things right, its like a endless fight…
Cant get things straight so I write, and end up with no delight..
With all might, I try to ignite, my inner self with no help I cant light…
Cause people forcing, and sorting, my feelings with no supporting..
And my style their sporting while violence I’ll soon be resorting…

Ken Dawg:
Things around here are gettin so heated, I'm underpaid and mistreated,
I'm gettin misleaded, soon probably end up like Latoya and get fired like she did!
Damn dawg you expect me to do 5 quotes a day, you fillin my mind with dismay,
I haven't taken a break since May, my butt hurts and you think that is ok?
Bustin my ass for $7 an hour, sweatin so much I'm soon gonna need a shower,
in fact my life is startin to go sour, startin to think I should have the power.
You say "bitch get me my coffee", thinking no one can top thee...
but guess what no one can stop me, cause like a magazine model im a hotty
The Baby needs a new diaper, and this daddy wants a new Viper,
workin at this job is making me hyper, it about time someone else pays the piper!

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shits good mayn bad name though "the riff raff" lol but it was straight

yo pretty nyce shit dawgs im nyce drop and tha same as wat he said^strange name

not a bad read... I was feelin ken dawgs flow a lil more...
musta been the multies... but riff faff did his thang... props...
overall, you prolly just needed to reword this a lil, and
riff seemed to force his multies in... just work on that...
but once again... nice read...
~AshY~

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