constructive criticism appreciated.

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Hi-Fi

dont sleep ya'll, leave link and i'll return the favour.... 1

Listenin....yer voice is off from that beat...almost seems like it was dubbed onto it. i'm listenin' to lyrics close and they are pretty tight. You need to change the pitch and flux of yer voice to seperate your chorus from the verses. Your voice is monotone (like Guru but with no energy), you gotta bring more energy kid. Sound quality of the mic or somethin with yer mic is bad. Again...good lyrics but audio levels and delivery need to be improved to catch peoples attention. Good structure to the song though.

look no link here, but check out in song forum and feed-back:
"A Thievez Execution"
"Incidental Contact"

they will either be on page 1 or 2 of song forum, most likely page 1....

thanx for the feedback man....i'll reply to that shit in a few...uppin

ok beat is cool.. vocals need cleaned some.. that may be mic tho.. overall kind of quiet on the whole.. need a windscreen or something.. i hear the breath pop a little..maybe just back a little off the mic.. flow is ok.. but slips at points... delivery is ok.. it just lacks some of the emotion id liek to hear .. overall this is a cool track.. just a few little things to improve on.. mostly quality
keep dropping



return the favor please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89343

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I don't like your voice dawg, fo' real. beat's pretty grimey flow is aight but like I said your voice aint really doin' it.
keep spittin'
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yo you did good im not sure what he was talking about you voice was fine dowg you did good. keep spitin never give up