i responded to:auspicious avalon obsenity

hook:
thats why i say what i say-do what i do-
and refuse to give a damn who-im doing it to.
as long as crowd boo's- and dumps empty bottles of booze-
at you-cracken your head till the blood spews and ooze.

the name NONCENTZ got crowds to scream loud-
weaker crews to bow-and the best to raise brows.
ahead of my time im the future of whats happening now-
the human paradox-who slap box- with his voice box-
a volunteer alcholic anonomyous the way my bars drop
is synonomyous with the way fiends detox.

piss off your city zone-
shit on an your zip code-
use a state map to wipe my asshole.

everything i drop is the hardest-
my lugies likeheat seeking warheads when locked on target.
i dont respect shit be it god or goddest-
its sin to pretend im not better than you...im just being modest.
the way i spit dope jargen-got columbians droppen-
the key value to compete with my free~style bargen.
fuck it i only live once and SO im makING it count
boxing style opponents get "ate(8)...in 12" by my mouth.
im the dsasterous!- exclamation point asteric-
making qoutation mark explode-
when i rappers chokes from one of my qoutes-
YOU LOOSE AIRSUPPLY-AND DIE-thats murder in morse code.
nothing you say is hot-
tequilla kicks your ass so how you licking shots?
and you asking NONCENTZ WHY THE STYLE SWITCH?
i twist and turn flows to leave m.c.'s sea sick.
there's 2 kids of m.c.'s-that have the ordasity to test me-
those that worship hell-
and those that want to go there but are scared to kill themselves.
thinking IF they can live another day they can start on a new breath-
but one more day is one more step closer to death.
which move is right when you got nothing left-
which path is truly straight when 360 is the earths circumfrence?
you cant answer that but still think your the best?
the only time i take an "el" is when i fail my piss test.
other then that i refuse to loose-
but either way you will now or later.....
im just nice enough to let you choose.


hook:
thats why i say what i say-do what i do-
and refuse to give a damn who-im doing it to.
as long as crowd boo's- and dumps empty bottles of booze-
at you-cracken your head till the blood spews and ooze.

uppin

eh...nice verse just hard to understand.I didnt catch wut u were tryin to say and sounded like a lotta big words.I dunno,maybe cuz I'm tired but what topic wuz this revolved around or is it more freestyle?Stay ^
-Avi

haha... word did a keystyle for an open mic... Ill cherish this for-
ever... nice though... it was an awsome drop... cant say a lot against this... your hook was creative... but it could have been better... it should have been longer, but its aight... nice drop dunny,
~AshY~

nyce tight shit dawg i liked it aiight good to read so ill give ya 8/10 for overall

Aiight Keep It Crackin Dawg Peace (v)

hmmm
mixed result here
seemed like you changed your style a bit
some lines were good but there was quite a few where i just thought...it was filler
hook wasnt bad and ad that to the flow and some decent lines its still not bad
but u seemed to drop off on this man..not your usual standard
vocab etc was cool..but some word play and shit suffered for whatever reasons in this piece

I love the way you do things like dis

boxing style opponents get "ate(8)...in 12" by my mouth.
im the dsasterous!- exclamation point asteric-

its creative an effective... you have definatley changed your style but continue to evolve coz whe alot of RB cats wake up onyou they'll be having nightmares bout "Why did'nt I think of that shit"

Word P, Word P, Word P... when is you gonna collab wit me? drop a joint with that split personality shit again... word p vs. NONCENTZ... i love that...and this shit... let's just say it's good enough to save on a disk...i got most of ya style on one disc...i'm makin a disc of the best text shit and it's gonna be several volumes of emcees...10/10, keep droppin...