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Old 11-15-03, 10:41 PM   #1
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A loving passer by

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All I needed is a simple hug and kiss goodnight
A “I love you” and a “Everything will be alright”
That is what helped me sleep tight
It kept my light in sight
Without it I couldn’t breath
I wouldn’t be, no more of me
Couldn’t you see how much you mean?
Couldn’t you see you’re the girl in my dreams?
Were things as perfect as they seemed?
I keep you close to my heart
I ve loved you right from the start
You said go I was gone
Even if I knew it was wrong
And now I re-live it through my songs
The days were short and the nights were long
But everything was all right when you were by my side
You forgave me when I lied
You loved me cause you knew I tried
You held me when my hopes died
And you helped my tears dry
And I didn’t ask why
Cause I knew it was your time
I waved goodbye
And as hard as I try
I know ill never forgive myself
For letting you pass me by.
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Old 11-15-03, 11:06 PM   #2
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this was just.. wow

full of off the wall ill emotion.. the flow was there.. personally i think this is one of the best things i've read.. nice job.
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Old 11-16-03, 12:10 AM   #3
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thx alot...i appriciate the feed back

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Old 11-16-03, 12:33 AM   #4
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Wow. I agree with Ayngel. I think that this is one of the best things that i have read in a long time. Everything was great on here. No complaints. You had a lot of emotion in dis and u hit me right in the heart with it. For that, I give u the upmost respect. Awesome job. Im looking forward to reading more of yours. Keep em comin. Most respect.
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