Poem I wrote about someone that everytime I talk to.. ends up reducing me to smiles..

All you see is yourself in the mirror, you can't stand the reflection you get,
If you were me you'd be in love with yourself, just knowing the man that I met,
You say all you do is fuck shit up, You think you're just good for nothing,
But through my eyes you're perfect, even though you say I'm bluffing,
Every little thing you say to me brings a foreign smile to my sad face,
When I'm talking to you its like your words take me to a better place,
You've gone through some tough shit in your life, but you pulled through it,
Theres things I thought I couldn't do but you're the one that helped me do it,
Sometimes I feel like I owe my whole life to you, everything I've done,
I meet a lot guys on a daily basis but in my heart I know you're the one,
Cause of that bitch you have a hard time trusting me and other people,
But you need to realize that not everyone ends up being that evil,
Understand that one person shouldn't make you feel that way,
She didnt know what she had so she let your trust fade away,
I'm sorry that she hurt you, but i know that you're so much better,
I love you, you can trust me... I wouldn't do that shit to you EVER,
If you could just look through my eyes and see what I see,
You'd see the great person that you are, and the best you could be.

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Once again great job. It seemed like a love letter, but it was great the way that you did it. This guy seems really special to u, and all i can say is hang onto him. I let someone go like that and i regret it. Everything was great on here in my opinion. Great drop, keep it up. Most respect.

I can really relate to this drop. I would like to thank you on the behalf of all good men, he needs to know just how good of a person he is. If things are anything like the situation I was in, he must feel like most of the problems are his fault. Don't let him burry himself with that kind of self loathing, get him to realize just what it is you see in him. That is what a very special friend of mine did for me, after a painful break up with my X. Great job on this drop, you did well.


Bounce...

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i can realte i think this was an awsome poem. i think you should have the person read this it is great drop the guy seem really special i think you should let him know who special he is to u. great job nicely done

Another great story telling kinda drop by you.. not suprised: )
Once you start reading it.. you just cant stop. You and dthsmissing have the same style... and i seem to get both of yous confused lol.

Keep it up~

I kno its weird isnt it. Hey gurl, any way we're related? J/k. It is weird that our styles are the same and that we seem to go through the same things. Yet its nice to have someone like that around. Keep droppin gurl. Most respect.

^haha yeah i noticed all that too...

And by the way, the person this poem is about DiD read it.. and he read it while I was writing it, aswell. I hope he realizes that he is a great person, and does mean a lot to me.. this poem isnt just a piece.. it's from my heart.

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^ yea that person read it...(looks around)....

lol I loved this piece...for obvious reasons...I guess anyone that spends the time to write that out in a poem after telling me the same thing time and time again can't be lying....so ur the shit! lol.....

much love
peace

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mwaha... you love me

thanks for responding everyone

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...uppin.

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Cause of that bitch you have a hard time trusting me and other people,
But you need to realize that not everyone ends up being that evil,


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Very deep, and a lot of truth to it. I just picked my favorite lines out of the whole poem. Very good drop, flowed nicely all the way, I had somethin like this happen to me, even though I don't know the exact situation. Everything was really expressed thoroughly, it was really powerful. Really good work girl, keep this up and way to represent IJL on this.

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.:IJL:.
reppin strong, wurdshizle

...aw! Thanks welcome to IJL btw

...UPPiN

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