The night sky emerges and mommy tucks me into bed
I look around my bedroom and remember what he said
Feeling threatened and disrespected but couldn't dare react
Mommy squeezes me tightly and feels the welts on my back
She whispers softly into my ear, don't fear.....never fear
her beautiful sirens vibes in my head started to stopp the tear
SMASH!!! I heard a crash and the droplets began to scatter
She caresses her ring as she sniffles and curses all of Saturn
Shes pantomiming dying in a glass box all the while claustrophobic
Death to us part in a broken home... envying the homeless
Im hearing loud swearing and mommy sweeps me off my feet
She runs to the door clutching me as she protects the car keys
As her mascara smears we drive off into the sunset at night
Mommy holds my hand and takes a breath...as we start a new life

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this was very, very deep...
I liked the structure... very nice flow, and good choice of
vocab... this hit the spot on me, cause my father before he left,
cheated on and beat my mom ALOT... I can remember the shit
that would happen... and this was almost realistic...
very nice read... not much I can say in contrast.... PROPS
~AshY~

thanks for the feedback A. T.
& Im sorry about you dad mayne
that shit shouldn't happen

upp'n