ite man,
8 lines,
both spit in 10 mins,
no d/r hate or crew votes........................u no............pz

ite man drop in 10 checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ............................................pz

ite man,

listen my lyrics like an *infection*, that you cant cure with an *injection*,
ill put you on an early *pention*, retireing you by myself no need for no *henchmen*,

the first 3 letters of your name with an o(homo), got your ass *explaind*,
cause your a sweet heart homo, i heard your scared of thunder and *rain*,

well i dont come with thunder but i will make a fuckin *storm*,
but the only thing you churn up is cum, watching telavision x *porn*,

cause you cant get any action with girls, and definately none on this *thread*,
homicides your name, and now like that i bet your wish your ass was *dead*.

ite dun man spit..................pz

This 'fake-slorin', has got da 'great snorin', "Oli" dogg, dis is rap, not 'skate boardin', fag, i dun even kno if theres a 'name for it', but the shyt u spit, shows wat a 'gay whore is'/1

Claims an alchoholic pothead, but at the bar like 'snapple please', but u MUST be on suttin, thinkin u can 'battle me', but u not a "pot head" u juss look like Jonny 'Appleseed'/2 (jonny a wore a pot on his head..)

ima leave u like "there aint no 'hope for me', dont think u better, cuz u got more 'posts then me', cuz in reality, u love my dick so much, in THIS battle ud 'vote for me'/3

im beatin a fag, i cant claim im 'hurtin a thug', the 'curtains are up', make ur relatives watch me rip out ya heart, n leave u 'searchin for love', but u love men, u even got 'sperm in ya blood'/4

ill push ur 'face in the mud', call me the doc, im 'takin ya blood', so u searchin for more like a "vampire", is dat wats 'makin u suk', it dont matter neways.. juss take ya 'fate as bum'/5

IM rippin YOU, itdont work 'both ways', not even a "chiropractor" could make ur 'flows strate', cuz we kno that 'u gay', this guy claimjs hes tough, but hes from da 'UK'/6

i can have u ripped in a glance, so scared, u stick to ya manz, pissin ya pants, all im gonna do is stand in stance, but ur bitch ass still needs an ambulance/7

In this battle, u got nuttin 'againsts me', wile i got da energy 'in me', i 'spit free' like Operah, to get this 'Win-Free'/8 (operah Winfrey)

shyt..
i thought this was 8 bars! damnit............................................ ......................

man u had run on lines dogg
and ya verse was wak
struc/oli
flow/oli
meta/oli
multi/oli
person/oli
punch/oli
vote/oli

hey oli hit up my battle no ones voting me vs 2mindtext
i need one more vote
honest vote dogg
peace

well.. it aint lettin me edit my post... so... juss drop 8 BARS.. if u dont wanna drop 8 bars make a new thread n ill drop 8 lines... mah bad...

wHoa wHoa wHoa..... aWwW RiiiGH Na... i oNLy HaD tO ReaD

HoMoCiDeZ FiRsS 3 BaRs tO See DaT He KiLLeD oLi oN DisS wOn...

LOL...HAHAHHAHAHAA He BaGGeD oN yOo....LOL...

N pLuS DiSs NiGGuH DiD 8 BARS!! Haa...

this goes 2 homicide definetly

how do you get movin sig?
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wow this was pretty weak..........

punches and mostly everything were tie...
but damn homicide....you fuckin stretched them shits like a mug....
it took away all the enjoyment of
your verse....no personals were used....at least oli said shit about
homicides name.....but weak battle here


vote=oli dogg....no hate


honest vote please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90779

iMMA GO WIT OLI ON THIS ONE...verses were weak but oli got this YO HOMICIDE WORK ON YA BARS MAN THEY 2 STRETCHED......................................... ....................................

flow*oli
disses*oli
punches*oli
vocab*=
structure*=

Vote*oli

i couldnt poll vote but plz return tha honest vote plz
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=90810

This 'fake-slorin', has got da 'great snorin', "Oli" dogg, dis is rap, not 'skate boardin', fag, i dun even kno if theres a 'name for it', but the shyt u spit, shows wat a 'gay whore is'/1

^^ i sed shyt about his name

Claims an alchoholic pothead, but at the bar like 'snapple please', but u MUST be on suttin, thinkin u can 'battle me', but u not a "pot head" u juss look like Jonny 'Appleseed'/2 (jonny a wore a pot on his head..)

Crackin on his sig^^^

IM rippin YOU, itdont work 'both ways', not even a "chiropractor" could make ur 'flows strate', cuz we kno that 'u gay', this guy claimjs hes tough, but hes from da 'UK'/6

I diss da place hes reppin^^^

how da FUCK yall gon say i had no personals? damn.. dats sum d/r.. he cracked on my name once n i had all da shyt.. but newayz.. juss keep da votes comin

DuN eVeN tRiP... i DuN KaRe... u GeTz DaT sHyT 1-8-7

oLi....Lay oFF aLL DaT Gay sHyT... iT GeTTeN OLD