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Old 11-17-03, 01:41 AM   #1
Speek.E.Z.
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Kill Shot

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Yo This Is To My Fake Friend Who Bit Off Me.. We Were Dawgs I Showed Him This Song He Thought It Was Dope. Then I Find Him Posting It Up On Another Site Claiming It Was His. Hell I Even Posted It Here.. So Here's My Kill Shot For The Bitch Fallen..
Heres The Site..
http://www.still-ballin.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=14
The Proof He Bit Off Me Is Posted There 2

Thought We Were Dawgs Didn’t Know You Would Turn Punk..
Fuck What Ya Thought.. U Never Was Good.. Kid U Aint Fallen U Sunk..
You From Toronto That Ain’t Gangsta.. Hell Son You Aint Even Black..
I Was The One With The Talent.. I Was To Afraid To Tell U Your Whack..
Infact.. Only Time You Got Recognition Is When I Dropped Your Name..
Now I Say Fuck The Game.. I’ll Spit On This Just 2 Rip You Away From Fame..
We Aint The Same.. I Always Had The Killer Lines On The Track…
Shit I Had To Since Your Verse Was All Filler And Mostly Whack..
Step Back.. You Know What You Did By Telling Everyone U Dope..
Son I Will Leave You Fucked Up Like A Man In Prison Without Soap On A Rope..
Got Skill..? Nope.. So Fucka Fallen And His Lack Of Skill..
If We Could Measure Your Skill It Be Zero To Nil..
So Fucka Hank Hill.. This Red Neck Has No Skill So He Bites Off Me..
Try To Write A Clap Back And End Up Having To Message Me..
Don’t Believe Me Remember Deadline Who Gave You The First Line..
Hell Even The 2nd And Third.. Shit Every Other Word Was Essentially Mine..
Like The Wave I Got You Up And Down But Now Im Sure You Will Drop..
Have Your Rap Career Dead Like This Was The Last Motherfucking Kill Shot ..
And The Only Flow You Ever Felt Was Me Pissing On Your Grave..
You Aint A Gangsta So This Is Your Warning You Better Just Fucking Behave..
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Old 11-17-03, 12:48 PM   #2
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thought the content was ok, but maybe a little basic with the vocab, but it flowed nicely and the structure was easy to follow...overall i thought it was a decent read......oh and wtf he doin bitin ya verse, thats shit man,the fool.......Pc
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