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Old 11-11-03, 11:04 PM   #1
Young P
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Young P Ft Formula... Eyes Open To Believe...

IP: 43BD EF72

Replied To...
Formula... Full Circle...
Auspicious... SS Piece...
AT... All It Takes...
Gene Pool Ft Masta C... Keystyle...

And Remember... Dis Aint A Battle...
All Feedback Appreciated...

Young P Ft Formula-Eyes Open To Believe

[Formula]
Pearly Gates, To Escape the Worldly Hate, I Pretend to Hate
What Fate Will Bring Upon Me, Used to look up to the sky
And Say Oh Great, I gotta wait and that's where I go when I die?
Didn't have the understanding of the man's plans, no Manuscript
Walked around with Mami, Boys sayin 'Man-You-Whipped'
Then She Died, Dad said He never seen thug cry like I did that night
So in Spite, I cursed him for the hurt, Why He Have to take her life?
I only see reality through tragedy now, realize to my surprise the normailty
No longer does Death Adle-Me, I Praise Daily now actually
Cause I finally know what the deal is, my conscience understands
That there's a higher man, Not-Shit I can do but anticipate
My Six Foot Depature into the Dark, I'm Comin To See You Kate...


[Hook]
I Didn't Believe, Till My Eyes Were Open. . . My Eyes Are Open. . . So Now I Believe...

I Didn't Believe, Till My Eyes Were Open. . . My Eyes Are Open. . . So Now I Believe...

[Young P]
If Heavens All Dat Its Cracked Up To Be, Den Why Were We Given Dis Life...
Night Life, Lies, Bad Choices Leave You Livin Wit Strife...
And Though I Fear God, At The Same Time, I Feel Like We Homies...
Cuz Ever Since 9-11 I Been Prayin, I'll Be Goin To Heaven, But Only...
If I, Follow Da Right Path, So Which One Do I Take...
Is It My Decision Or Fates To Make...
Will I Travel To Da Next Life Or Am I Hellbound For Heavens Sake...
And As I Grow Olda, Da Will To Go On Gets Less And Less Bolda... Holdin Dat Nine Ta My Head, Ask For One Thing... Tell Me When Its Ova...


[Hook]
I Didn't Believe, Till My Eyes Were Open. . . My Eyes Are Open. . . So Now I Believe...

I Didn't Believe, Till My Eyes Were Open. . . My Eyes Are Open. . . So Now I Believe...

[Formula]
Never bible thumped, dumped the man's words into my mental bin
But when I lost that sentimental friend, I was back to the instrumental gift
Then I thought to myself, how could I have all this talent?
God countered and said I blessed you, So It Ain't No Challenge
Now I manage to write up a song with no stress in 20 ticks or less
Them 20 pricks with tummy tits, Talkin about the way a dress
Rednecks, said I'm white and should rebel against the Culture
God showed me the right, no fight, I let the words drift over my shoulder
Rip harder when nights are colder, I grow older and still feel upliftment
Words have shifted, from no meaning to meaning something, I'm Gifted
Name a beat I ripped it, all because of him, they feel the shit I speak
So I continue to reach, breach barriers and dwindle the beefs...


[Hook]
I Didn't Believe, Till My Eyes Were Open. . . My Eyes Are Open. . . So Now I Believe...

I Didn't Believe, Till My Eyes Were Open. . . My Eyes Are Open. . . So Now I Believe...

[Young P]
Had Da Mind Of A Killa And Da Thoughts Of A Psycho...
Whether It Was RC Or Tyco, I'd Blast Like On Nitro...
Put Up Mad Fights Yo, But Now I Look In Da Past...
I Wasn't Myself, More Like A Man With A Mask...
But Gods Shown Me Da Way, Made Me Believe...
Got All Eyes Open And I Like What I See...
Gods Shed His Grace On Me, A Blessing In A Curse...
Now My Soul Can Finally Be In Heaven Though My Body In Da Hearse...
I Follow Da Scriptures Every Day, A Godly Follower In Every Way…
I'm God's Thirteenth Disciple, No Need For Fighting Or Pay...
Douse My Body Wit Holy Water Every Day, When Last Month, I Couldn't Stay Sober...
But It's Aight Now, Got My Eyes Open... Da Struggle Is Finally Over...


[Hook]
I Didn't Believe, Till My Eyes Were Open. . . My Eyes Are Open. . . So Now I Believe...

I Didn't Believe, Till My Eyes Were Open. . . My Eyes Are Open. . . So Now I Believe...

[Drift Off]
I Didn't Believe, Till My Eyes Were Open. . . My Eyes Are Open. . . So Now I Believe...

I Didn't Believe, Till My Eyes Were Open. . . My Eyes Are Open. . . So Now I Believe... Now I Believe...

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Old 11-11-03, 11:20 PM   #2
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Nice drop....I liked this, it was worth the read i thought, well done....the flow was real nice through out the piece, didnt really get off i thought...the vocab was nice in it, nothing wrong with that...structured was pretty good as well...overall i thought this was a good collab...keep at it....and keep dropping.
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Old 11-12-03, 03:23 PM   #3
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Dayum, up this shit. Ya'll sleep on the dope shit. We return favors, drop links.

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Old 11-12-03, 05:08 PM   #4
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Old 11-12-03, 05:17 PM   #5
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Old 11-12-03, 09:32 PM   #6
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Up. . . Provide Links and We'll Reply. I'ma be hittin some posts up in about 15 minutes.

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Old 11-13-03, 03:49 PM   #7
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Old 11-13-03, 09:34 PM   #8
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good ..collab worth da read....

i think u both brought ...all the servins 2 the table on this one...
formula wipp'd out a good flow wit wordplay
Young p followd his flow strong and hit wit nice wordplay also...
^^this peace wit the collab fit very well 2gether...

much enjoy'd

sometime all 3 of us can collab....

great job..

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Old 11-13-03, 10:06 PM   #9
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yo i was feelin that i like tha way you both flowed it was consistant through tha whole song tha hook could have been a little better but tha verses were jus iLL keep it up yall............
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Old 11-14-03, 12:32 AM   #10
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yo tight shit aiight keep it dropin and shit aiight Peace (v)

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Old 11-14-03, 04:06 PM   #11
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nnice vocab and multiz eral good and shit yuh feel me... cant wait to see that on audio (if u do it) but chea real nice job... 1
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