Fgee, Auspicuous (sorry if i spelt it wrong) and bigg E Z

I don't understand the envy
Treat me like a public enemy
I try to be friendly and you
derail my safetly, lifes crazy

I'm reachen for R-I-P cuz im classed a P-B public enemy
Absulutly crazy like Orlando globe troters beat badly
Friends betrayed the trust made love turn to lust
Dust to dust ashes to ashes and hate in masses
Bein smashed as fallen glasses into million peices
I'm always gettin dropped as easily as fecies
Girlfriend lost my touch so she said shit bout us
Realisticaly I can't hide, Or hibernute from a cuss
Im'a man with pride, so i smile with my very stride
Even though my life is'a flesh wound deep inside
Depribed of friends a magnetude of heartful trends
Fashion show of hate the way you look at me depends
If you belive the rumours or you judge my own behavier
Createn tumours then die slow for not bein my savier
Im'a ride till armeggedon im summin ye'all aint forgettin
Never half steppen i'm comen prepared my lifes preppen
Stages of insults but is my fault? for my lust of'a dead pulse
Cuz my judges is false, prolonged tobe a devil's cause
I wasn't sent to repent iwas sent to break through the fence
Even through the suspence of neglect an lack of intelligance
I refuse to stay bruized because of my enimies love of hate
This world makes me regurgitate my anger to evaperate
Souls that pushen me over the line, im young kid in his prime
A star, with gas ready to shine, fuel in my tank push my peddal
I'm comen harder then a fallen peace of atomic metal
I wont sit an stettle no matter the influences of my peers
Portaying fears into art work of my obscene tears
Paaint a picture an put a dart through my hearts internal bleeding
Public Enemy comen back at my envy to stur up misleading
Believings of sayins increasing the morals of my brains
My thoughts bein the key to me bein free R-u-L-e..M-I-K-E
Follower not, just a kid trapped in'a box think i was blond
Cuz im lost in'a square an i cant move, yet i reach for beyond
The limite think i didnt realize the scriptures of my pictures
That i drew on the wall you peopel created a enemy who cant fall
Hold me down, push me around but i'll talk over your sound
I will be heard, even if you make me swurve over the curb
I'll give you a smiley, rule aint bein funny dont think im clownen
Public enemy, you created, an I exscaped your hate
This is me, you can't create a humans fate..thats a mistake
I aint frankinstine, dont need medal in my neck..im'a reject
Im'a kid longen to be loved reachin wit no hands for respect
Live to die, steal an lide, conpulsive eyes closed blinde
No vision of where im going im supossibly public enemy..fine...
believe wutcha hear, but it aint always true..thinkin aint a crime
My thoughtas rapped in c-4 hell i could possibly blow ya mind

A public enemy
Losen the envy
Believe the fake
It's your mistake
My lifes at shock
For my thoughts
I'm pluggen cannon
taht can't be shot
Cuz roads blocked.
Fuck it...i'm putten it to a stop

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

lengthy but worth the read hot it all aspects except i wasnt on it then it would be ill lol

yo that shit was good to read and shit but i like tha theme ov it aiight keep ya shit commin its good stuff aiight Peace(v)

man........................nice.

Yeah i agree....this was a pretty nice piece....kinda long but good read i thought....it flowed pretty well, didnt really get off at all....you structured it pretty well...your vocab was good in this, nothing wrong with it...overall it was a good piece...keep at it...and keep dropping.

thanks for the reply uppen...

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

yo pm me to collab tonght now whatever

did...uppen for some replies

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Good shit Rule, Nice way to rep from all of ya'll. It was long, but you kept it nice and done, pretty good shit to read. I didn't have any problems with it so...I'll just say good read.

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this drop was enjoying to read and it also dropped the topic down in a such understanding way. keep working your majic dog.

thanks uppen

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

still lookin for some critiques...would be apreciated..pz

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Yo Rule,
That shit was Ill, The concept and structure, the only thing I could say is break it up, when it's written down, nice flow, I would like to talk to you some more about this, hit me up..

pretty nice - played but nice keep spittin

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