i got more dope shit than bob marley/
rhymes so sick, they could stop a party/
girls all around me, ready to blow/
i got more hoes than home depot/
battle me, bitch i'll stamp ya/
got more fans than a summer in tampa/
i spit a verse whenever my mind steams/
rhymes more tight than a petifiles dreams/
i have more lines than disney land/
more metis than there are grains of sand/
i own more South Pole than antarctica/
i'm so cold, gotta wear a parka, duh./

a bit short but it was allright but i think u can make it longer but allround a pretty good Peice


Aiight Peace (v)

anymore

feedback bitches

you need to elevate a bit..... your lyrics were decent and you had some nice metaphors/self glorification in there... flowed well.... just need to use some multi's and maybe make it a bit longer.... peace

7/10

please vote on my open mic, "Mind Theory"... thanks

it was aiight, real hto for a short drop, 7.5/10, its better than bitch killin...you good, and ur getin better quickly, ur flow is tight, ur rhymes are aiight, kget pass self glorification and murder...do somethin real...one love..and props

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The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

You really need to start getting your replies in right when you make an Open Mic. Read the rules.
If you don't I'm going to have to just start deleting the ones you don't post your reply lists in without a warning. Sorry, its the rules.

hey, your shit was dope. you got your own unique style and no one can take it or talk shit about it. keep doing what you like to do.