bring da heat nukka, norm rules, 5-15 lines, no crew votes, no hate votes, let keep it clean people, and no written raps, this is a battle.

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grabs the bomb, put it in my jet,
oh you better worry you had better sweat/1
i'm bringin the heat (defeat)
when i'm done you'll be nothing but a sac of meat/2
my words are like bombs,
i deploy and they destroy/3
this site is no toy, its RB.com,
by now the voters are saying ' oh boy, mike is long gone/4
like veterians of war, all i see is gore,
but they are wondering what you are good for/5
with reflex so quick, they take aim,
like saying " you prick, you think this is a game"/6
what a hell of a way to die,
with a rifil up your ass and a bullet in your eye/7
and now this battle is said and done,
remember this is war, it aint for fun/8
and while your laying there on your back,
think of you skills and how much you lack/9

pine you should go back home, keep ur bitch ass in a dome/
kick ur ass and stick a comb, down ur throat so you can't moan//-1
no wonder ur get ur ass kicked, cuz you say u have a big dick/
but fuck man all you have is a 3" bic//-2(lighter)
fuck i've told you before, to shut the door/
oh fuck it slam it in ur, face and make u squeal like a wild bore//-3
beat ur ass out in the desert were it be dryer, take that lighter and set you a fire/
you said you was gone that means that u should expire, face it u think you can grow to make a bigger empire//-4
you say u a drone?, fuck that only shit from that cone/
throw that bitch a bone, and make him beeg like a dog cuz thats what he is! that bone has all ready been thrown//-5

let the votes start commin in on this! votes ASAP people!......
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Tough battle.

Both of ya need ta work on format!!!

Probably giving this ta Mofo cuz he brought more to the table.
Hits were more in number.
And he had a few multi's that helped spice his shit up.
Still a very elementary verse, but enough ta beat what little Cone brought.

Cone, I guess you got the personal's if his name is really Mike.
But you lacked hard punches.
You barely had any attempts at them.
Only your closer contained a good one.

Up that on your part.

Hit more often.

Peace

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Sorry fo rthe extra post...

Hit me back and return the favor someone.

Vote here!

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uppin(2) notice how i stayed more on topic............
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^^this is not a topical battle.....no such thing as staying on topic...

and this mofo takes this in my eyes just cuz of slightly harder punches....

pine cone, you gotta stretch out you bars a bit, not make them too stretched but if you use so few words per line you gotta form them into a very solid punch, and you just weren'tdoing that in this battle.

Vote=mofo...
^lol....can't believe i just said that

good luck to both of ya.

peace.