i posted on epic-Lm-choke dog and several others

im the type who's hectic and energetic-non sympathetic
to you pathetic excuses.... and manic depresents.
You cant match how do this and if so....
then either you my clone or im going schitzo.
either way im ill when i spit it-ballistic and synic-
doctors and infected patients sue me because i did it.
and if i do sound like anyone else you herd flip it-
then im sending my mimics to kill them their families and crittics.
See anthrax in my druel aids when I spew……
im a one of kind who's a one out of a million ways to kill you.
the other 999,999- are my lines-
One for each enzyme in your spine-
If I cant kill you with words then ill do it in sign-Language
then switch it to mime and still inflict the same damage.
My writs hot-my spits blazing heat rashes if your not-
My skills alone got the crowd hands up like cops-
Blu(blew) the spot.
Million rhyme rippen phattest style and im still flippen-
You aint real..your career’s only in animation like the SIMPSONs’.
Your careers dead if I catch you slippen-
And if you aint scared of falling off then why you trippen.
I tower over haters like sky scrapers-
Jerk off with a dollar bill cause im here fuck with they paper.
ahead of my time so before you battle your already fucked-
And if I do fall off a bit its cause im trying to get you to catch up.
Yall some oldtimers with alzehimers-
And like first time o.d.’s you fiends are a waiste of one liners.
Hope yall aint bullshitten cause I aint ever quitten-
Just issuing denchers if you spitten bitten writtens.
You not ready for it-its better of you forfeit-
I make killen commercial rappers a buissness while I go corperate.
The only led disbersal- is from the number 2 skillcraft-
And I still amass- a universal- death toll planetary vast.
You aint got a concious chance let alone the the faint~us-
I kicked every plantet in my path all that’s left is your~anus-(Uranus)
why battle???? How bout why not????
Acting like we chill…. that’s just a cold front.
You Know you cant handle punchlines this tight –with this might-
and couldn’t beat me on a mic or in a fist fight.
Go ahead put me on blast to boost your hype-
That’s a gay move..and how you prove…
you mad im not your type.

Its "hymns"

LOL I CANT SPElL WORTH A FUCK POP

LoL, its better then the kids that come back with. "Fuk u u nurd"

uppin this for anyone

"And if you aint scared of falling off then why you trippen"

I kinda like that line. Overall this was pretty nice, I felt some Shady at the beginning, and some Luda thru out the rhyme, but other than that, you on another one playa, good shit.

^id say he's just Word Perfect...i hate it when someone compares u to sum1
anyway back to your dopeness here word..some nice concepts punches word play flow and dopeness all mixed up together

And if you aint scared of falling off then why you trippen.
I tower over haters like sky scrapers-
Jerk off with a dollar bill cause im here fuck with they paper
^dope

plenty other lines which caught my eye
nice work..
props

HAHA, still at it huh kid? fuck ya, good to see you still fuckin em up, ill shit, as always, id have to quote the whole thing to quote the dope lines.... damn thats hot... hit mine up bro

where you been twin

DAMN, tight drop, you threw down some ill punchlines and multies an metas damn good read ...keep it up man pz

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this is aight...yeah you have nice wordplay.....ok vocab..its good, but not special, it lacks that little bit that makes it special, its just a rhyme, well structered, all that...it like your rhyme is chrysler concorde, fucntial , very well built, handles well...but its not an aston martin v12, both cars, botht brand new and polished nice, both do the same thing, btu one has a lil bit extra..keep goin, ghostwrite for soemoen...

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Jerk off with a dollar bill cause im here fuck with they paper.
hot line
I make killen commercial rappers a buissness while I go corperate.
hot line

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thnks

you had a nice concept goin here and your vocab and rhymin was on point, feeling it dawg. with good word play as usual....yes all in all this was another tight fuckin drop, sum ill shit.........Pc man