10 to 15 lines

normal voting rules...

try ta hurry

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i release a flash fury like "tidal shifts"
spit 'bout the "same depth", this bitch jus' "drips"
barely even makes a ripple,
BLuNT lands 1 punch an' has Da_Legend layin' crippled
it's fuckin' "basic".. you're style's jus' "simple"
"tasteless"... shit, it's no wonder you so "bitter"
face it, i'm considered a heavy hitter
200 plus posts an' u still a beginner.. *damn*
i'm a patriot like american missles
explodin' on Middle Weights wit percision
your births date's not applicable, (N/A - check profile)
'cause deaths iminent this instant bro
it ain't gon' be no split decision
I'm winning, this isn't skill it's jus' instinct

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just got back from lunch

checking in..



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YO CUD U BOTH PUT AN HONEST VOTE ON DIS CUS ITS GETTIN SLEPT ON DEN ASS SOON AS YOURS IS DUN ILLPUT AN HONEST 1 ON THIS. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528 THX..............PZ

cmon its being slept on honest votes n ill repay da favor with 1 on this.............thx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528 ....................pz

Grenades got 5 seconds delay ~ all I need is two seconds to murder him//
So fucking pulling pins, you really need to START PULLING WINS//
Hoped that you didnt spit first knowin that you're bestin-a-vet//
Cuz I didnt want you sit around da screen "waiting for death"//(think about it)
And you's just another herb I've blazed fo frontin G//
Cuz to me....you's nut'n' more than a [blunt] MC//
And from how I see it....shit's really lookin grim//
Cuz everytime he's uppin for votes he's simply uppin my wins//
......Gots to be crazy to fuck wit me nigga//
.....When I've murdered more dudes than Sadam n Hitler//
Like "babies thinking twice" this merking g'make you "crawl in doubt"//
N' all dese [diverse] punches I got jes got dis fool Knocked-Out//
(Check his sig)

see, that's why u win... u got nothin' to hit personal in ya sig or profile... whatever... uppin'...

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lolol dawg.....thats y u shud b creative.....use metas and wordplays....if u cant use personals lololol

ite gota go out but ill put 1 in on dis in abit.............................................. ................................................pz


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528

how did i not use metas,,, lol... u don't see the wordplay in my verse... that's all i could really use..

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^^^^^ stop freeposting man.......that's like the third time.............................................. .................................................. .

if ur not gonna vote den dont bother posting

Aight, here we go:

Blunt

i release a flash fury like "tidal shifts"
spit 'bout the "same depth", this bitch jus' "drips"
^^WEAK OPENER 4/10
barely even makes a ripple,
BLuNT lands 1 punch an' has Da_Legend layin' crippled
^^EXTENDED FIRST PUNCH, OK, SECOND LINE HERE IS EH.. 5/10
it's fuckin' "basic".. you're style's jus' "simple"
"tasteless"... shit, it's no wonder you so "bitter"
^^NO RHYMIN HERE, WEAK 4/10
face it, i'm considered a heavy hitter
200 plus posts an' u still a beginner.. *damn*
^^DECENT PUNCH I GUESS 6/10
i'm a patriot like american missles
explodin' on Middle Weights wit percision
^^AGAIN, DOESN'T RHYME HERE 4/10
your births date's not applicable, (N/A - check profile)
'cause deaths iminent this instant bro
^^OK PUNCH, KINDA WEAK THOUGH 5/10
it ain't gon' be no split decision
I'm winning, this isn't skill it's jus' instinct
^^WEAK, NO RHYMIN AGAIN... 3/10

TOTAL: 31/70 (44%)


Da_Legend


Grenades got 5 seconds delay ~ all I need is two seconds to murder him//
So fucking pulling pins, you really need to START PULLING WINS//
^^OUCH, NICE PUNCH 8/10
Hoped that you didnt spit first knowin that you're bestin-a-vet//
Cuz I didnt want you sit around da screen "waiting for death"//(think about it)
^^EH... NOT MUCH TO THINK ABOUT BUT DECENT 6/10
And you's just another herb I've blazed fo frontin G//
Cuz to me....you's nut'n' more than a [blunt] MC//
^^NICE PERSONAL 7/10
And from how I see it....shit's really lookin grim//
Cuz everytime he's uppin for votes he's simply uppin my wins//
^^AGAIN, GOOD PUNCH 7/10
......Gots to be crazy to fuck wit me nigga//
.....When I've murdered more dudes than Sadam n Hitler//
^^FILLER....5/10
Like "babies thinking twice" this merking g'make you "crawl in doubt"//
N' all dese [diverse] punches I got jes got dis fool Knocked-Out//
^^OK 6/10

TOTAL: 39/60 (65%)

win goes to Da_Legend

like the first punch, off the hook

peace

see that's why i'm audio... 'cause every place u say it doesn't rhyme it actually does... you just have no skill in actually spittin' a flow.. whatever...

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YEH I THINK DA LEGEND ON PUNCHES FLOW N STRUCTURE JUST GOT DIS CLOSE SHIT DO GD VERSES FRM BOTH BLUNT MAN I WNA BATTLE U SUM TIME NOT BAD^.............................................. ......D PUT AN HONEST VOTE ON DIS PLZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528 THX...............PZ