Verse #1: (written by gene Pool)
I wake up every morning, to the same sound, raindrops fallin down/
expressin my feelings, a life without, a life with doubt, no point ta shout/
but these tears I see when I hold my dearest near/
transfer to me, as she passes with a whisper in my ear/
and this fear got me stutter struck, as I lay her back/
with her blood splashed across my gut, can’t forget the past/
cuz it’s what drives us on, to live this life, even after everything go’s wrong/
and sometimes I wonder, why I still go on, writing these depressing songs/
but it’s the memories of loved ones past/
and friends once they’ve strayed away from ur path/
it’s the experiences we keep, that get us through the weeks/
get us through the darkness, no matter how bad u can’t see/
but believe in me, I know what it’s like, to wonder “is this life?”/
And u keep asking urself the question, till u find the answer, that’s just life/

Hook: (written by Gene Pool)
despite in life, can’t seem to find peace and light/
stripped of pride, only feeling left is to die/
but u ask urself is this life? And u fight and fight/
for an answer, till u find, that it’s life runnin u blind/
(that’s life)

Verse #2: (written by Masta C)
Opening my eyes to a new day to experience nothing just more pain…
Thrown obstacles that I cant overcome, failure equals pure shame…
I just cant seem to get out of all these depressing mind states….
But everything that I try to do no body really finds great….
Feels likes theres a part of me missing like theres a hole in my heart…
Left me feeling down always have a frown and you being cruel is too hard...
Tears full of sadness touched by a bit of madness that you gave…
I always face blue days cause this pain just doesn’t go in two ways..
You constantly shunned me away like ya didn’t care cause ya always bust lies…
Now im just facing darkness cause truth is the light but this is just life…

Hook:
despite in life, can’t seem to find peace and light/
stripped of pride, only feeling left is to die/
but u ask urself is this life? And u fight and fight/
for an answer, till u find, that it’s life runnin u blind/
(that’s life)

Verse #3: (written by Gene Pool)
thoughts of death slowly close over my eyes/
predicting my life, makes me wish I would die/
tears stream down through my tearless cries/
shouts of pain, rip through that stream of light/
shrouding darkness, on the other side/
I ask myself again, is this life worth living?
But in the end, my thoughts were never forgiving/
cuz all my friends have left me, and my girl dead/
so I take my gun, loaded with one last bullet, putting it through my head/
cuz their’s just to much pain and anguish, now it’s with the restless and the dead/
it’s kinda funny about the thought, that this song ends short with my death/
but I guess this is what life really is, to think ur living for somethin/
but in the end, that’s just life I guess, it turns out to be nothing/

Hook:
despite in life, can’t seem to find peace and light/
stripped of pride, only feeling left is to die/
but u ask urself is this life? And u fight and fight/
for an answer, till u find, that it’s life runnin u blind/
(that’s life)

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yeah leave us some feedback on this piece if you check it out, its much appreciated, thanks.

that was tight dogg. the flow was good, nice use of multies. the verses seemed to accually go together unlike some of the other collabs.

sorry for forgettin this but yea I replied to:

Formula
Word Perfect
Masta C

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Hey thanks for the feedback so far, Keep the feedback coming in, its much appreciated, Thanks.

you compliment each other well and no error really stood out hot peace stay up

hey ppl I would really appreciate if I could get some honest opinions and feedback on this so if u view this please read through it and leave a post. thanx in advance. peace.

also thanks for the feedback so far lets get some more on this piece.

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Hey Thanks For The Feedback WordPerfect, Keep The Feedback Coming In, Its Much Appreciated, Thanks

yeah i agree with wordperfect this is a pretty tight drop, gene you seem to be evelatin nicely, masta, another nice drop....the only thing i wil say is gene your multis seemed a little forced in the first verse, but other than that.......Pz.....nice collab pplz

Yea Nyce Peice Yall Good Drop Allround ill give ya 9/10 for tha verses and 8/10 for tha Hook

dat waz hella tight, yo i feel ya... da flow waz konsistent and loved yo theme, u guys k33p it krakin, o p.s props to ya gene, yo shit waz deep yo.

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