recap of rules,

you spit first
i set up
10 lines max
8 lines min
no b/s votes
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no swayin
no bitchin
if votes arent explained then they wont count

aiight i'll drop shortly after you, between 10 mins and 15 mins
maybe sooner

Lets do this...

~Open~
Differential essentials set the differences between you and me//
Can't even compare to the amatuer that your attempting to be//
Knock some sense inbetween, your falling back without me even moving//
Not even with the invention of lyrical lotion could your lyrics be soothing//
Incidentally dented with lyrics your starting to lose your flow//
Not even coming close, I just thought that you should know//

~Close~
How do you expect to survive this when you claim you ain't livin//
The laughter of the audience is the only respect you'll be givin//

shiet..i had to rush..15 mins dog..good luck

peACE

aiight, no hate

shud be minutes later, and not one punch could raise my alarm,
you gon be associated with more verbal shots than a vodka bar,

battles me is like waves, im long, u cummin up short wit medium,
im sharp, leave you in more stitches, than the funniest comedian,

god is one of your interests, well you never knew he was alive,*
im hear in the flesh ready to win like me and the devil rap connive,

right now u aint no ace rap ill, with the topics that played,
probs been used against u B 4, but i dig graves, with ur spade

my perception of you being ill, was spoiled by my detection of born to kill,
this line aint stretched, it just provides the traction, to conclude i won with skill,




explanations: concnve: co-operate secretly to bring a wrongful action.
in this case me (maybe) beating a vet, it shouldnt happen.

* in his profile he lists god as one of his interests.


aiight
peace
no hate
good luck

an his last loss was against born to kill.

aiight lets get some votes......................................

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Nice Battle Peeps
Setup~Double
Metas~Ace
Punches~Ace
Consistency~Ace
Personals~Double(only like 1-2 about his name)
Overall~Ace He Got This I Liked His FLow Overall And His Vocabulary was Nice He Was Consistent With It Hollaz .....................Feedback On My Battle On Sig PLease~1

hmmm this was close

Flow: Tie
Punchs: Ace
Metas: Ace
Structure: 007
Enjoyment: Tie

Vote: Ace

this battle was good...ace had some nice vocab n i was feelin his punchs a lil more...007 came with a nice verse tho.just needed that lil more...props

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92387

hit that up

oh yeh you didnt poll on my battle 007

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punches=ace
flow=double o
creativity=ace
structure=ace
complexity=ace

my vote=ace...............very competitive battle

hit this wit a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92387

Uhm .. I don't really care for hwo yall vote on it, but I'll go my way ..

Ace - Came nice wit' vocab, and flow was pretty nice .. Too bad there were like no punches cept for the closer .. Never like the "Lyrical ... " stuff ..

007 - Came weak with punches but punches nonetheless .. No flow and vocab wasn't as up, but you had a personal or two too ..

Overall .. I can't vote yet but by critiquing I'd vote for 007 cause he had more punches and a personal .. If someone would like to point out or explain where the punches were in Ace's verse .. Please do ..

you know, after a few battles you learn that even if ya beat some body the votes usually go to the most respected, or the veteran. but thanks for the vote, and i know that i did better than all the other votes are makin out.


oh yeah.....................uppin

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uppin for votes............................................. ..................................................

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thanx for voting peeps......
nice verse double..and yea..if you need
the stuff that you asked me for..i will be glad
to help ya out there..stay tight dog...

uppin...peACE

aiight.....................but seriously i think i did better than the votes show.........................uppin for votes............................................. .

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aight.........
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uppin...............
peACE