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Old 11-14-03, 06:58 PM   #1
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The Omen

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posted on blunt mc ,potient ,and snake eyes.....................



HOOK:
its the O~M~E~N-
the prophecy forfilled the legends-
where the saga begins in end
the O,M,E,N
from hell to heaven-satanists and revrens
judgment to you non believers say your amens.

the say a great leader rules with an iron fist-
thats why i spit iron bits when i flip- mic scripts.
this aint a song its a dictatorship-
my words are law each verb is punishment.
these m.c.'s are just a embarassment-
trying to fuck with me till i fuck em back....
now they file for sexual herassment.
i warned you through omens-but you were hopen-
to burry me…………
to underground coverage like i was in a coffen.
yet as long is there is life in me….
the heart knows no stoppen-
from me spitting tobagens of jargen-
and hitting you with lines so phat…
you die from artery cloggen.
with the change of seasons-
I give rappers a million more reasons
To hate me cause I be composen-
cold wars that leave m.c.’s cryogenically frozen.
Yeah you herd right if by now you callen me an asshole-
Its cause you getting shitted on by a diariatical flow.
See one the words are placed in print-
Your loss is recorded legally on document.
When its copy writ-
you’d have to pay me to change it.
You think your better then me? Inconclusive
but I can prove it……
.Area 51 and hangar 18 are the hosts for alien cryptology-
But my brains the home for extraterestial technology.
That why i dont battle non major m.c.’s.Realistically……
why should I play with someone who aint in my league?
Imagine me waisting a rap or beat on some dumb fuck-
That’s like telling professional athletes to take pay cuts.
if the sun and earth collide.and its my time to die-
burry me ass up where i lie-
put my logo and binochulars to my side-
so i can look ahead to leaving the world behind.
I refuse to subside with intellectually denied-
So I fast forward eventually pissing you off…
to this present time.

HOOK:
its the O~M~E~N-
the prophecy forfilled the legends-
where the saga begins in end
the O,M,E,N
from hell to heaven-satanists and revrens
im judgment to you non believers say your amens.
I slay mens and fems –gays and lesbians.
Non centz bitch I am the omen.
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Old 11-14-03, 07:04 PM   #2
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yo shit was hot, nice multis, great structure, wordperfect is a good way to describe it, you jus showed me what true textual lyrical dexterity is, u jus made m a better rapper thanks....
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Old 11-14-03, 07:32 PM   #3
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good shit man, i liked your flow and your rhymes were fire, you had elavated vocab and great flow, it was a great read, and our collab do you want a different verse? or is that 1 fine? that i sent you...anyways good drop keep it uop man
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Old 11-14-03, 10:31 PM   #4
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yopur verse was fine im acquiring one more body for it to amp it up even more but your verse is great dont swet that
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Old 11-15-03, 12:41 PM   #5
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this was some serious shit man, good read.....your use of vocab shon on this one......overall i cant really pick a fault, but i thought the hook was a little weak compared to the verse, but it was still decent enough......i saw your reply in mine, for a collab, im up for it...if ya wanna PM me with sum details...aight....peace
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Old 11-15-03, 02:57 PM   #6
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uppin and thanks
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Old 11-17-03, 02:40 PM   #7
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uppin this
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Old 11-18-03, 01:05 PM   #8
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