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11-16-03, 10:59 PM
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I'm Better Than You
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Evolutions Creation
IP: 958F ED04
Young P...Evolutions Creation...
Replied To... Yungone...Clap It Up... Yungone...?(forget)... Pacasomac...Hits For The Streets Dawg...Lol... Evolutions Creation, Bombs, Warfare, A Fighting Nation... Nowadays We Find Its Our Own Selves That We're Facing... And While We Fight For Our Nation, The Reason Is Kept Secret... What's The World Coming Down To, Hates All Around, We Even Speak It... This Violence Has Got To Stop, No Reason For It... Killing People Is A Crime, Yet We Manage To Award It... Ask Yourself, Can A Common Ground Be Found... Or Will The Cycle Continue, Hate Forever Going Around... So Will We Find Peace Today, Or Is It Lost Forever... Rainy, Rainy Days, And We Can't Control The Weather... Hate Storms The World, Grows Worse Like Pollution... Is It True, The World's Just Another Creation Of Evolution?... The Hate Seems To Escalate, With Every Step We Take... Worse Worsens, And We Just Blame It On Fate... Faith, A Word Which Has Grown Uncommon... No Prayers Lately, Can't Remember The Last "Amen"... Still Gun Possession Is A Whole Other Story... Young Bucks Wit Firearms, Trust The World Will Be Gory... A Once Prosperous Planet Has Lost Its Glory, Hate Replaces... Love, Trust, Hope Lost, Along With Happy Faces... So Will We Find Peace Today, Or Is It Lost Forever... Rainy, Rainy Days, And We Can't Control The Weather... Hate Storms The World, Grows Worse Like Pollution... Is It True, The World's Just Another Creation Of Evolution?... So Will We Find Peace Today, Or Is It Lost Forever... Rainy, Rainy Days, And We Can't Control The Weather... Hate Storms The World, Grows Worse Like Pollution... Is It True, The World's Just Another Creation Of Evolution?... -P |
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11-16-03, 11:00 PM
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I'm Better Than You
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IP: 958F ED04
By The Way
Dis Wuz For My Open Mic Schedule For CV... Feedbac Appreciated... -P |
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11-16-03, 11:26 PM
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IP: 9B6A 1F1E
nice piece..good creativity,flow
stayed on the topic well................. you did well....... i think ya coulda added more but it was still ill SPIT ON OUR BATTLE NOW!!!!!!!!!! |
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11-17-03, 10:33 PM
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I'm Better Than You
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IP: E604 4FBE
Uppin For A Lil...
Feedback... Drop A Link For An Open Mic Piece Or Even A Battle And I'll Hit It Up... Wanna Know What RB Thinks... -P |
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11-17-03, 10:56 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 1BA6 D97B
yo tight shit man liked alot but like brix said I woulda like to have seen this written out to be a bit longer, loved the topic ur creativity was tight along with ur flow hell everything was down tight man. good shit. keep droppin and peep my open mic when u got the time "7 Years Past" leave some feed muchly appreciated peace.
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