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Old 11-18-03, 04:19 PM   #1
BrokenWings
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Crazy and Confused (plz read)

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hey, this is a poem my friend actually wrote, but she dont want a RB name and shes never really written a poem before, so please give feedback on this and critique her well, I will be sure to send her everything posted. Thanks much! enjoy the read.

Wanting to know if it’s really true
That someone special is crazy 'bout you
Feelings so strong, love's getting deep
His love is something I need to keep
I can't let you go, I want you real bad
But what I want least is seeing you sad
I don’t want to hurt, I don’t want to cry
Deep inside I want you to be my guy
Is this love, is this real?
Do you want to stay in this deal?
Why you keep on changing your mind
Love is what you’ve got to find
If its love then let me know
If its not then let me go
I don’t want to be just another girl
Who’s in and out of your mixed up world
You bring me in and push me out
I don’t know what that’s all about
You tell me that I broke your heart
Do you think I want us to be apart?
Long hug, short kiss
This is something I cannot miss
Whether or not you love me
Ill keep on loving you, that’s the way its gonna be
Starting to realize, I’m thinking its true
Crazy bout me, I’m crazy bout you
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