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Old 11-17-03, 03:55 PM   #1
set-ignorance
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The life of ignorance

IP: 0BA5 FAF6

Replies to@ Deva, Envy-Skillz, etc..




The life of ignorance is not all fun//
The life of ignorance is not with a gun//
The strife of deliverance has just begun//
The life of ignorance is not to run//


A genius at making a direct point towards people//
Un-believable extremeness when being discreet-full//
Like a rat in the passageway I bite furiously//
Like a bitch, been slapped you bleed horrendously//
Serious thinking when up against a dick-wad//
Deliriously sinking, when he gets lyrically hit hard//
By a tactical flame thrower from an impeccable verse
Enough to leave his metrical head burn up n burst//
Like a curse of grief I haunt the un-wanted//
Put punches beyond belief, n reverse your lines to ‘muted’//
Like dejected rubbish, your ass gets booted//
Like an elected president, you get prosecuted//

The life of ignorance is not all fun//
The life of ignorance is not with a gun//
The strife of deliverance has just begun//
The life of ignorance is not to run//


Experienced fighter when it comes to the stage//
I release my anger n frustration out in a rage//
I cage my opponent to minimal strategies//
Compose an element bringing him to his knees//
Like a fresh breeze of carbon monoxide I kill quickly//
Burn up the eyes n the insides of my opponent drastically//
Lyrically talented when it comes to dramatic scenery//
Like when 50 said to Jeffery “nigga you’d love to be me”//
Exceptional word play that leads the mind stray//
Like an Uzi with a microphone, I lyrically spray//
Bruising your torso n bone, you’d be stupid to stay//
Letting the world know… ‘Set-IgnoRance’ doesn’t play…


The life of ignorance is not all fun//
The life of ignorance is not with a gun//
The strife of deliverance has just begun//
The life of ignorance is not to run//
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Old 11-17-03, 10:18 PM   #2
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thats not too bad nigga
good vocab
good imagery too
rhyme scheme okay, you coulda did better i think
chorus might need work
overall not too bad, sorry it was slept on
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