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12-07-03, 06:42 PM
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Ebony & Ivory
IP: 8891 4F3E
Ebony and Ivory theres 2 diffrent women//
Might not look alike and has diffrent opinions// When you here their names you might think black or white// One might be strugglin and ones livin the easy life// Poeple may think that they life may differ// Kids at home like ''grandma I Miss her"// Left their kids for dimes and nicks(MARJUANA)// Almost christmas but don't belivie in St. Nick// So you tell me who Ebony and Ivory is// You really wanna Know well Chrome's Aunt and Moms IS// Ebony & Ivory== (My mom ebony, & My aunt Ivory) I lost my mom 2 MARJUANA(sees gone away with a man) My aunt Ivory is in the hospital (cancer) |
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12-07-03, 07:22 PM
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IP: D2D1 B5AF
yo im from flint man
that was real.... a basic rhyme scheme but i still felt it cuz it was decieving nice shit, gotta talent man keep postin. ........................................... |
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12-07-03, 09:00 PM
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IP: 1B3B C284
yo this was good a bit confusing if you didn't post some meanins
the rymes scene was off...you should trie to deep inner realy down in your self take your time you'll get it... keep elevating...no hate jus an honest opinin.. peace |
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