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Keystyle by Keys aka Vital
To you my special someone by Loco
R.I.P Crossroads by Lolong


Look at me with these circles under my eyes
black and blue shadows... I sigh
Will you please stop picking on me you fucking bully?
That includes you Dad... That shit does something to me
When I wanted that chakara book... You made fun of me
I'm a teen dad... What do you expect from me?
Fuck the lab... I'll write what comes to me
And I haven't even mentioned school yet
I have my place in the guidence room set
Yet these counceling nets can't catch this mess
You can't say everything will be fine
arrest and give a fine to that bully of mine
and if you fully show me that you hold the key to stopping school shootings
I'll be rooting for the board to be helping rappees
Tappings I hear on my car window
rapping about how these bad guys sin more
Did you just happen to throw a burger at my door?
God now I have to clean up more than my heart sore!
Everything they do makes these tears poor
that's why I look illfated... From my eyes down to the core of my sole
Look a little at my under inflated stomach: you'll find eggs ready to grow
I ain't ready to have no child so stay away from this girl
I tend to rhyme even when I'm just talking
and that's why the stalking is so popular in this hallway
You attracted to these wached on phrases that is in different phases?
I'm moody today 'cause my hampsters cage needs to be changed.
I don't have time to clean it and even if I did clean it I don't mean it
I'm just going through the motions like we did



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Harrassment in the city is hard to find... I've learned
No one has touched me or lied... I've learned
Or said hush when I try to learn... I've learned
These teachers is nicer... No preachers like in highschool... I've learned



You glued my ass to that chair in art class
and it's not fair that these kids stare at the past
So now Woodstock is only good when I come in
These kids get a good laugh
Stared at in Jewel and laughed at in K-Mart
Kate you're suppossed to debate when that fool starts
Stick up for your friend and then you can call yourself smart
and Amanda who always stuck her hand up is now popular
Her loosing all that fucked up weight gave her cock at Southern
She came home and told me how high she got
I was jealous... So three weeks later... I got higher than she got
and now that snot has to stop because she got caught
she was in the secret garden and the cops stopped
They saw her and her people smoking that joint
but they didn't land in the joint
They just is now taking a class that proves points
That pot is not the pot our parents got high on
it's more dangerous... It's laced and you'll get tied on


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good shit overall

seems ya dads a bully lol

you going through some shit if this is real

but overal solid verse keep this shit up 1

I do go through this shit, but it has stopped. I go to Columbia College. It's all cool now.

lol... it was aite but got a bit boring.. no offense.. just ive heard a lot of stuff about this topic.

ok overall.
keep open mic'n

tight drop chick, you got some soul. It takes a lot to really put your heart on the line and say or write something that leaves you vulnerable. Don't let anyone take your shine, you got hte gift. Just work on the structure a lil and you'll be one of the greats.
But that's just my opinion.

yo nice shit 9/10 yo good luck wit college