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11-19-03, 01:19 PM | #1 | ||||||
This is my first post!
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To you my special someone
IP: 0303 B891
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Keys, LM , A.T Hook: Fuck a hook Love this lady like she my baby Memorys of dreams we surpased need your interference to come near this my girl u there daily to contain me when i cant figure out what to do i come to you my true one and only 2 man crew... As i drift bout you in my dreams it seems that its the dearest fuck your block... hope you all know, my lady.. *pause* is a glock.. 1
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11-19-03, 01:46 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 9EBD 5113
dog did you even rhyme yeah ya did but barely honestly i wasn't feelin this and ya lines was chopped up and no structure was there you need complex words,vocab, multis, metaphors work on that dog don't take that shit as beef, hey i wanna battle you dude you spit first but i'll set that shit up now ok check in right here
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11-19-03, 02:09 PM | #3 | ||||||
This is my first post!
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IP: 3A79 B1A6
lol this was a joke my friend jose typed it up when we mas maddddddddd high
k checkin in u called u spit
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11-19-03, 02:12 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 9EBD 5113
what dog i'm settin it up so you spit first what you scared to spit first and that shit that he spit made you look like you weak as hell
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11-19-03, 03:19 PM | #5 | ||||||
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This was too simple. Your lines need to be longer and you need to have some better vocabulary. I think this was cheap. It could have been longer too.
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11-20-03, 11:37 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 6E30 6470
talkin bout my shit being wack... what the fuck was this shit haha.
you aint rhyme not fucking once (just about) your flow was fuckin wack as hell too... you really need to learn the difference between a "poor" drop, and a "good" drop... A.T.- GOOD LOCO- POOR... to da mods, sorry for freeposting, but after this cat tried saying that my skills aint nothing special... I had to come see this nicca's shit... lmao... and too my surprise... well, I cant say I was surprised. ~AshY~ |
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11-21-03, 04:58 AM | #7 | ||||||
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This Defines the word whack
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