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Old 11-19-03, 01:19 PM   #1
LoCo
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To you my special someone

IP: 0303 B891

Reps:
Keys, LM , A.T

Hook:
Fuck a hook
Love this lady like she my baby

Memorys of dreams we surpased
need your interference to come near this
my girl u there daily
to contain me
when i cant figure out what to do
i come to you
my true
one and only
2 man crew...
As i drift bout you in my dreams
it seems that its the dearest
fuck your block...
hope you all know, my lady.. *pause* is a glock..
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Old 11-19-03, 01:46 PM   #2
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dog did you even rhyme yeah ya did but barely honestly i wasn't feelin this and ya lines was chopped up and no structure was there you need complex words,vocab, multis, metaphors work on that dog don't take that shit as beef, hey i wanna battle you dude you spit first but i'll set that shit up now ok check in right here
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Old 11-19-03, 02:09 PM   #3
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lol this was a joke my friend jose typed it up when we mas maddddddddd high
k checkin in
u called u spit
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Old 11-19-03, 02:12 PM   #4
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what dog i'm settin it up so you spit first what you scared to spit first and that shit that he spit made you look like you weak as hell
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Old 11-19-03, 03:19 PM   #5
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This was too simple. Your lines need to be longer and you need to have some better vocabulary. I think this was cheap. It could have been longer too.
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Old 11-20-03, 11:37 PM   #6
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talkin bout my shit being wack... what the fuck was this shit haha.
you aint rhyme not fucking once (just about)
your flow was fuckin wack as hell too... you really need to learn
the difference between a "poor" drop, and a "good" drop...
A.T.- GOOD
LOCO- POOR...

to da mods, sorry for freeposting, but after this cat tried saying
that my skills aint nothing special... I had to come see this nicca's
shit... lmao... and too my surprise... well, I cant say I was surprised.
~AshY~
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Old 11-21-03, 04:58 AM   #7
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This Defines the word whack
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