ite man 8 lines.
both spit in 15 mins.
no d/r hat or crew votes.


gd luck............pz

checkin in awaiting on youts............................................. ...............................................pz

yo when i'm in tha mind of state, i rhyme to meditate,
so now let me demonstrate, how i confenscate,
this wanna b pimp ass bitch, i'm leave a mark, a stitch,
leave u to die, to bleed, in your own blood bath,
tha scene is red, ur dreams are dead, feel my wrath,
i'ma climb tha scale, b tha best, like aftermath,
ur skills are twisted, messed up, like lemon and lime,
now get back to ur job where u can earn ur seven dimes,

awaiting you, u have like 4 minutes............
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ha meta heavon, oh shit you forgot to rap a good verse.lol.heres my shit,

Look at this newie so eagre to battle, he forgot to check in,
oh shit that bad luck cause you also forgot to drop a verse to win,
ill admit this for a vet, this herb is no where near compertion,
but ill still use him as bate, but wate im no fuckin fisherman,
youve all ready broke the rules cause i stated no one rideing dicks,
your mother wont be proud of you, but ill give her a ring on 666,
yo pm me sometime and ill give you the secrets of war but not by the outlawz,
a quick spit to merk this prick, snappy shit like lobsters claws.

..............pz

still waiting...................................
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i believe ur time is up...................

aight sorry for previous post /\/\
aight lets get some votes in UPPPIN
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flow:Kenoras
punches: oli
structure: Kenoras
personals: oli
creativity: oli
enjoyment: oli
vote: oli
nice battle dawgs.

peace

poll vote man............................................... .................................................. ................thx.......pz

soz my bad.........................thx dogg.............................................. .................................................. ..............................pz

Open- oli
Metas - kenoras
Creavitity - oli
Personals - niether
Flow - tie
Finish - oli
Abuse - oli

vote = oli, nice level of heat kenoras but u gotta come more creative in ya wordplay

My Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92417

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92568

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K: not necessarilly a battle rap, u came weak wit everything but flow n structure...use some rap taktiks like metaphors, multi's, wordplay, similes, personnals...etc...

yo when i'm in tha mind of state, i rhyme to meditate,
so now let me demonstrate, how i confenscate,

^^ this has in it an inclusion of 3 well known rhymes so try to find sumtin else that rhymes wit these three, at first i thought i was readin sumtin from Jedi Mind Tricks or sumtin else overly played...

O: hits were there but weren't all that hard, step them up to give a WOW effect next time...

Look at this newie so eagre to battle, he forgot to check in,
oh shit that bad luck cause you also forgot to drop a verse to win,

^^ started off hard wit tha personal but fell off at tha end...work on tha bar as a whole to give tha WOW effect...

vote: Oli easilly took this, Kenoras need to step up majorly...jus elevate...

peep this wit an honest vote to keep shit poppin...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92760

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