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10-21-03, 09:01 PM | #1 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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im quite the LOOKER!!!!!!
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im quite the looker- so whats that matter!!!
No matter how hard i try to look- im seein grey times in this mirror Pain more physical-climbing this ladder-possibly falling so fast i cant quite remember Up or down deacon does it matter- lifes series of events just seem to scatter.... I'll wait a second-looking at my checklist- i've stopped eating but im still breathing--my problems hit a new chapter--- excepting things i never thought before.. down to a T i wish to be some place but i cant see anymore A dream to flee from--a surface to clean more--im just not me anymore... reverting from mind to reality-sickness Wow where did you get that SHIRT!!!! This shirt? AHHHHHHH a fashionable view isnt it.. Sketched out by hand from a lower level unfortunate inadequate to be perserved at a normal beings surface.. But i wear it beautifully not that it matters... My mind inside chatters.... Wake up deacon who are you?.... Im nothing more than a ceiling of thoughts.. Brought out like industrial plots... ahh a picture perfect man inside he's not.... -1- wow kicked this one out like a veggie burger.... werd
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10-22-03, 09:09 AM | #2 | ||||||
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this kinda has me confused a bit. When I read this line
"ahh a picture perfect man inside he's not...." I thought right away of a quote i know of. "You see a person perfect by seeing there imperfections perfectly." Flow was good and this was a fine poem. keep droppin. Spect JT Last edited by Smooth JT : 10-22-03 at 09:20 AM. |
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10-22-03, 02:02 PM | #3 | |||||||
Special Ghost To Blow
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Deacon I can honestly say ive never seen you flow and
you did in this somewhat with a partial flow sprinkled with thought provoking lyrics here... I may be wrong but the shirt represent far more than a. shirt and more like how you carry yourself amongst. everything that you cross paths with to devide. and conquer like spread legs or something. you dont suck at all homie how in the. hell could you say that for your. lyrics this was very very. good forrealz my shots fired...in your direction...duck...or embrace it for illness lies no replacement...no lie..dont question.. stare into that mirror and face it..your nice with it... your brain might have punched out but once again turn on those fuckin lights with it to luminate a city la paz Last edited by Content : 10-22-03 at 02:05 PM. |
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10-22-03, 02:26 PM | #4 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
Content...you got the message man....thanks for input...nice little verse you made up to boost me confidents i am a new man because out it...
thanks for the thoughts smooth as well.... -1-
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10-28-03, 07:02 PM | #5 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
uppin from earths core to earths surface.....
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10-28-03, 08:29 PM | #6 | |||||||
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i thought it was capturing in a sense of mind...
it was reflecting that people really have problems... and that they need to be addressed for them 2 b released... excepting things i never thought before... seems 2 b going into a new relm... and thats whats exciting... Last edited by Content : 10-28-03 at 08:36 PM. |
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10-28-03, 09:20 PM | #7 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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hahah content....its a mystery of what really was said..haha..
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10-29-03, 02:13 AM | #8 | |||||||
Special Ghost To Blow
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
maybe I have no idea what im talking about
I dont know how to explain anything once again this was good...different from normal.. |
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10-29-03, 12:43 PM | #9 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: B2C9 B2B1
nah mayne i was talking about the edit..on ismael's thoughts...maybe you just fixed some spelling or something cause your a caring person or maybe that dude just ripped me in half and you didnt want to see me cry...thats the mystery.... i understand what you said man..thanks for looking out...
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11-07-03, 07:32 PM | #10 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
hmm wondering if i could get more looks at this...if not its cool but i really liked this piece..
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12-05-03, 04:36 PM | #11 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
im bringin this back because i loved this piece.....not sure why but i do
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