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Old 11-22-03, 04:19 PM   #1
JaYDeE
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h0w i feel ab0ut the w0rld 2day

IP: 8A6E E115

0nly reason why im here
cuz im stayin real
but g0tta robb + steal
f0 dat full c0urse meal
stay real real dirty
and c0nceal 9mm steal
with mah mind set tah
murdah murdah murdah
kill kill kill
send me to antarctica
if ya want me tah chill
but ya kn0w h0w ya feel
when ya d0nt yeild
fr0m makin hella drug dealz
when ya g0tz ya chance
f0 a rec0rd deal?
when ya real
wit real emcee skillz
cuz u want dat mill
itz madd fucked uP
0ne minute ya slangin
next minute ya handcuffed
0nce again mah bad luck
in a cell makin it uP

quick shiet, dun0 pissed 0ff
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Old 11-22-03, 04:44 PM   #2
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that was ok. the lines could have been alot longer. i liked the rymes and concept. just make em longer n ull be good
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Old 11-22-03, 04:49 PM   #3
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thanz f0 da feedback - i want 0thahz feedback 2 s0 keep postin i d0nt give a fuck if ya like it, or hate it, post ya feedback
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