Potent/Edicius

When I heard 'bout you and shelly.. I thought it was a dream
Maybe I should slice your belly.. Too no how it was screened

Man what the fuck u sayin u let this bitch come in between ?
i didnt ment to hurt u homie, but i was drunk, what can i do?.

You shouldn't of picked up that glass, I should kick your ass!
But the whole of me just wants to scccrreeaaeam, na'mean!?

I feel u dawg , but dont get this shit twisted, ..
shes hoe.. addicted to sex, loves to get fisted

I know its a fact But don't be calling her that
You surely lack Any signs of having my back

Im havin ur back, by exposing the truth, ..
u rather knew it now, by me or by some other kind of abuse?.

Nah.. nah.. Stop making all kinds of excuse!!
Ya no everyones gonna dispute your repute!?

U can turn it the way u want, but i didnt do it to make u mad
u mean more to me than that slut so plz dont look that sad..

Infact Im Glad.. At once i've gotten rid of Bags Of Shit
But.. I can't undersatnd how could you Brag my Bitch
What do you want me to do . .huh!? . . Laugh at this

I know u cant laugh and im sorry for what ive did,
but i hope u can forgive me, lets get back to the crib..
have a drink, and smoke some weed, ..cuz fightin over this bitch aint what we need..

Hell.. Lets proceed, I ain't going to leave till you don't breath
Oh yeah.. You might be at ease saying that you won't tease
But you expect me to believe.. this half hearted piece of piss

What i sad i was sorry, so wassup? u want me to drop on my knees
beggin u to forgive me please oh please, ..?

Nah, You done it b'cos you want to be me, but you can't be
Whats all this shit ' Why can't you just see ', But I can see!!
You felt the need to try & breed with my girl.. Go To Hell

I did it cause she wasnt satisfyed with what u had to offer ,
i fucked her good , first time she cummed , now u the one with suffer..

Oh trust me she was gratified.. But was it me who lost her?
Fuck it.. Now your going to loose your head mate like fosters

Up!

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Fuck you

wlll done you captured the back to back mental aspect of inner turmoil and battle whoever was which you blend perfect.....story wordplay and usage all elements this was a great read

most things about this were on point

nice wordplay
nice immagery
nice topic
topic was on point

overall 9/10


*and whatever wordperfect said*

please drop some feedback on my open mic *breaking............*

aiight

peace

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