Threads i replied to..
1.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92947
2.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93327
3.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93404

The thought of me fallin asleep is dreaded, Life's shedding,
Kids are premature waking up to the same old bed wetting..
I wake up with my heart spreading, I keep waking up in cold sweat,
In my dreams i make swishes and i hit three's in the old net..
This kid im battling is gonna get it i'll dead ya lungs are through,
I'll bust a nut in your face and then i guess ya dream cum true..
I dont rap for fun but i do it cuz i love the game whats your name?
You've fucked a dozen girls you got something and sluts ya game..
Better yet you'll get slain, Im crossing you over in ya dreams,
I crack and fracture ya legs im snappin and you bend ya knees..
You came acroos a dope and fresh writer, You didnt know im fire,
Tried to hop a fence with barb, you taken the cut like barb wire..
Only in a dream you feeling ya self in real life ya skills arent much,
Grip your dick cuz here i come, I got this cat scared in the clutch..
Whats the rush? In dream the sleep is so satisfying i stay hush,
Im feeling fine and dandy,The shits great and it'll make you blush..
You see me losing any match but you failed to see skill mr bean,
Your comic relief and when i lose to you its only in your dreams..
I like to count sheep before i knock out and hit cloud nine,
You envy me and my rounds are timed in dreams my routes fine..

UpPiN..FoR RePlIeS..

this was coo
kinda sounds like a battle or something
is it directed at anyone???

anyway try using more analogies and shit like that
make ure lines a little bit more concise

good job

hit up my open mic its in my sig i need more feedback

In was kinda directing it towards my opponent but that didnt work..

i think you got more then enough skillz and id like to work with you sometime if you like