Sick of the crucifictions inside of this music business...
That leaves two defendants landed in court, due to a two-bit witness...

A rappers true description is not who they depicted to be...
Fewer listen to the real but base decisions on the convictions of me...

Picture the streets, I paint ghetto pictures, JJ Evans with a mic...
Figure the beef, wasn't left with sciptures an industry with no reverends to save my life...

Commercial artists work the hardest....Yea In being fake...
Don't see the mistakes that either will make they souls depleted and raped...

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That's a good quick drop. but that's the problem it is very short but I feel you on what ur saying

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish

thanks for the feed back

uppin for more..............

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uppin for some more feed back

com on.......need some replys and opinons.......

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This Was Decent
The Rhymes Were THere But The Structure
Gotta Go.. Get Sum Depth Into The Piece

Hit Any Or All oF These Up In Return
Forever
Dont Call
Before Your Gone

Sick of the crucifictions inside of this music business...
That leaves two defendants landed in court, due to a two-bit witness...
Yo those opening lines...ill. I thought I was in store for a nice lil story piece.

A rappers true description is not who they depicted to be...
Fewer listen to the real but base decisions on the convictions of me...
Disappintment. No story. I still kinda like the angle you took on a subject that's gettin' a little played out in and of itself. Conscious rappers bitchin' about commerialism is almost becoming a cliche itself. But your lyricism is pretty dope.

Picture the streets, I paint ghetto pictures, JJ Evans with a mic...
Figure the beef, wasn't left with sciptures an industry with no reverends to save my life...
Yo, I think the flow's nice. You're using a lotta multies, and that makes the flow good I think.

Commercial artists work the hardest....Yea In being fake...
Don't see the mistakes that either will make they souls depleted and raped...
This shit was just a lil short. Would like to see where you go with it when you complete this piece. Ill drop though.