You know the rules 20- 30 lines you spit first

Yo cobra hit this up with a vote when ya done......................... Holla at ya boy!!!!!!!!!!!! Up Up and AWAY....................... Stay blazin

my bad just hit up my battle vs cyphilaids HOLLA AT YA BOY............................................... ................Peace

the cobra, dat aint no poisonious snake
like the name says, your cobra's a light weight
what you think dat bitch bendin over and lookin at
she sayin "dat a dick? or a wick fulla candle wax?"
you stuck it n her ass, but she still couldn't feel it
her pussy skin was bigga so u tried 2 steal it
and i know u cant rhyme but i aint gonna blame
it must b hard wit a dick like a dime, from fort wayne
my punchlines are wine, so sweet u could drink
and i found some of yours in the W.E.C.
so u're good wit your tongue? imma teach u italian
"forte" thats how u sound when u ride my stallion
yo ass is like 711, open all day
u wont get no play cuz i dont swing dat way
you make a betta snake charma than a snake
once u in they trunks, u keep a nigga's junk awake
time 2 leave, dis aint yo type of spittin
boy u great at salivate, but yo raps are shittin
so kid im done wit u, time dat u called it quits
i thought i told u? silly faggot, dix are for chix

yo dis is a forfeit, cuz u didnt show.............................................. .................................................. ......................................

critique if possible.......................................... .................................................. ..............

Look at this bitch goin by italy//
Like a little midget, huh mini-me//
I know that your just to weak, thats why you envy me//
Thats why when you rap you do it pitifully//
All those line are just you blowin smoke//
On the venom I spit you just choke//
Cause I'm the one man takin on the mafia//
bustin shots so hot you need a fire extinguisher//
I'm not the one thats gonna linger on ya//
The only way you get laid is by a blow-up doll//
Show up, fall// NO ups-yall//
my lines are a deadly as them killas of cops//(cop-killers)
Stop drop and roll cause you've already been mopped//
Out,of,control when I handle the glock//
Not one or two a full clip full of shots//
My clip never stops// a mother fuckin girl you are you just shop//
you don't buy close or even buy shoes//
you buy lyrics to use impressin beauty saloons//
Just a little bafoon rappin to the beat of cartoon//
(Merry Melodies beat kicks in)
Look at this bitch goin by it-a-ly//
he's a punk and can't hang-wit-me//
that's why, he tried, to battle me//
but he'll fall like humpty-dumpty//
just as I suspected you were nothin at all//
when I saw your battle all the shit hit the wall//
So just go home curled in a ball//
Just another victum for the cobra yall//

A-th-i A-th-i a-th-i Thats all folks!!!

Opening: Tie (Yall both sucked because ur cappin on him about being a lightweight and ur a fly weight and Cobras just sucked :-/
Punches: Italy
Personals: Italy hit hard ( Cobra really didnt have any)
Flow: Italy
Closing: Cobra because Italy's is wayy overplayed
Win: Italy

OK OK OK Respectful vote 0-1 uppin for votes yall Thanks for voting player I'm outta here.......................................

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mo votes............................................. .................................................. ...anybody

flow: italy
punches: italy
structure: cobra
creativity: cobra
personals: italy
complexity: cobra
enjoyment: italy
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peace

oh shit................ vote: ITALY............................................. ...

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peace

Guess snakes just don't bite that hard anymore........................
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Italy

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