checkity check in dog

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.

I'm checkin in i'm bout to spit.............................................. .................................................. .................................

aight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.

Jay i'll beat ya no-prob you suck like a blow-job dawg ya flows-flawed you wack and i got ya heart beatin fast like ya "nostril" is "chockful" of crack I'm like a terrorists you tha "hostage" dawg you can't "stop this" i'm a lyrical criminal crazy you can't phase me i'm "unpredictable" ya flows are "dispecable" sayin you a rapper dawg you must be "hypocritical" and don't get mad when you lose and start "throwin fits" i'll kill ya go to ya funeral and tell ya fam i send my "condolences" ya flows are a "wack outcome" this will be ya last battle like Jay's "black album" dude you can't see me ya something like Blind Fury cept you have no "fury" this is ya trial i'm the judge bitch and the "jury" i'll have ya beggin for mercy dawg you better start steppin in a hurry for i locate ya body to a cemeturry

man this dude a NO SHOW.............................................. .................................................. ................

Hey yo look:

Dawg ya better Wreckcognize before a Swanndive like Greg Lou without the gayness,
off the platform with 12 guages-and like Billy The Kid "Make Ya Famous",

After I dismantle ya ammo with this mic and make you another example-then I'll cut ya throat,
make ya earn ya alias and expose ya ladiness, word of advice "up for votes",

Youz an M without the M-and a J without the Z-and for me-this is Eazy without the E,
So I don't need X to pound and drown ya G-listen to me,

How pathetically-I alphabetically destroyed you and all ya existence,
Cuz my persistence overlooks ya inconsistent resistence from a distance.

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.

Sorry this took so long. My job called me out several times. With my job, there is nothing I can do about that. I do apologize though.

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.

yo jay jay took this oone but tight battle, you both have skill. props to you both........................ my vote jay jay...........................................
...................... yo i voted on yours now vote one this old battle, i just want it to be finished cause its been there for weeks...................................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9805#post929805

uppin' for votes............................................. ........................................!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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aight lemme see...i saw jay jays record n thought he'd come l;ike a synical newb...well he did..lol..jus playin

breakdown=
punches-jay
sustainment-jay
structure-none
flow-jay
creativity-cut
wordplay-none
metas-jay
overall-jay

not bad but he got my vote
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP OR I'LL JUS PESTER YA PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93576

Advice for ya'll....
take the "..." outta ya verses...shorten them n check other peeps structures
e.g chrit pz

uppin' fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.

jay got this shit wit his harder punches and disses that otha cat need to work on his structure his shit was kinda hard to read...

Vote:jay

^^i forgot tha link will u plz return da favor honeslty
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0046#post930046

uppin' fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.