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11-28-03, 04:37 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Ode to my Television
O heavenly box of light Burnt upon my mind are images of Seinfeld and ER I have always loved you but, alas, not all have For years you have been made fun of and spit upon Your creation being marked as the downfall of a healthy world But this is clearly untrue Perfect dimensions 13 inch Zenith with a built in VCR You are cheap and foreign But you have never let me down For you are mine, and I am yours An unfaltering friendship Boy, TV, and Remote Where human love and spirit have failed me You have not We need no one else to survive We have each other And that’s all that matters werd |
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11-28-03, 07:54 AM | #2 | |||||||
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hahahaha........i liked this....
funny shit........... i started reading and thought 'oh no another herb tryn'a be witty but.....alas i enjoyed it (i am very bored at college and stoned but...hey) Thanx for the laugh. Pz |
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11-28-03, 07:57 AM | #3 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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okie that was funnyn as hell lol....not much to say bout it but it was creative and funny pz
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11-28-03, 11:54 AM | #4 | |||
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lmao
This was funny. Nice read, real creative. Brought the first laugh for my morning. keep writin keep elevatin
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11-28-03, 12:21 PM | #5 | ||||||
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LMFAO. This was great. Kinda pictured you standing in front of your tv reading this to it. Wow, Thanks for the great read
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11-28-03, 04:14 PM | #6 | ||||||
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thanks, haha
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11-28-03, 04:56 PM | #7 | ||||||
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funny stuff
a love poem to your tv thats hilarious keep up the posts |
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11-28-03, 06:33 PM | #8 | ||||||
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this shit was funny as hell. i thought it was madd creative to write a love poem to ya tv.
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11-28-03, 11:32 PM | #9 | ||||||
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[color=light blue] i am glad y'all like it..................damn![/color]
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11-29-03, 04:43 AM | #10 | |||||||
Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
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If there is a joke in here somewhere... I'm not catching it.
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