I'm Tired but still holdin' up my fists~to~Fight
Pissed~at~Life, Wired holdin' my pistol~Tight
Mixed~up~Right with wrong in the Struggle stayin' strong
I've been gettin'~High barely gettin~by for so~Long
so hold~on, If you don't know right, How u gunna know~Wrong?
and you askwhats wrong with Society? it's muthafuckas Eying~me
Like we aint equal, I thought thats what Martin Luther Died~to~Be?
So Fuck the Government and the Industry, I want all yall to Witness~me
Kick~a~Free, at a "Women's Rights" Concert In a "FUCK BITCHES~TEE"
See these things Don't Come Easily: Love or Success
A well balance of Health and Stress, Being Called the Best
So check the Philosophey, Yes it's Probable and Possibly
there ain'y No such Thing as HEaven or Hell, C'mon GOD TALK~To~ME!
Ya got me going in Circles, sometimes I wanna Hurt~YOu
Help me Work~through, I don't wanna COnvert~to an Atheist
I still have Some Faith~in~this, Please DOn't Make Me Switch
and Faith Nowadays is Currently~Waste, it's Currency~Based
Money is the Route of All Evil and the Devil is slowly taking this Place...

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I thought this was alright here....your structure was pretty good, just watch the line length on some of the lines thought, kinda stretched out there a bit...You had some good multies in this, i liked those...flow was alright in this....overall good piece...keep at it.

yea i liked the flow vocab and wordplay good multis and punches good shit

overall it was good could use a bit with structure but it was good

nice look on the feedback yall.. Appreciate it.... on3...