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Blind spit.
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G'luck man
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chinktastic? dont hate on ya self, leave that for me
cuz i'll crack ya back easier than a fortune cookie
you just a rookie.. why your crew wearin 'black ties'?
oh! cuz its funeral time, TAG about to fuckin die
ya lifes a fuckin lie, rappin cant be your hobby
when you probably spend half ya life practicin karate
any topic im on top of it but this clumsy bitch drops it
the extent of your skill is like ya dick..one third of a chopstick
i got this...cuz youre "herb," like deep in my pocket
smoked him like roach and saw his own bitch's head noddin!
her head bobbin, damn this shit doesnt get sicker
tags girl like tellin me "wow American cock really is bigger!"



explanations:

most is pretty understandable.....

-tag just joined the crew 'black tie'....ppl dress in black at funerals
-his hobby says: rappin

everything else u should get

This kid is nevous, flushed and scared and his voice is kinda shakin
His face is redder than an Indian covered in blood whos sunbathin
I'll tear ya apart like Tommy Lee to Pamela's pussy
This battle is over look how little effort it took me
Your like an action figure, right down to the definition
Once they pay for you they can put you in any position
I beat ya so bad man, it's like I up and killed ya twice
That'll put ya back to .500 surprised ya didn't put up a fight
You a dumb bitch , writin stupid rhymes aint I right jegs
You though bowling balls were actually black people's eggs
I "smoked" ya dawg cause your rhymes are just "Black & Mild" bitch
You and your lover were in a sleeping bag thought you were a giant Twix

Explanations:
Indinas are called Redskins
Tommy Lee went out with Pamela Anderson
Two losses will put him at a .500 win percentage
Think about the Twix line lol

hmmm that was definately not a good battle for TAG
personals and punches..Jego
wordplay...jego
overall ..jego

i'm not gonna break it down fully cause its pretty obvious my vote goes to jego

Good battle. Both of you had filler lines which is kinda gay, especially in the middle of a verse. Tag had two which really jarred my enjoyment of his verse. Some of tag's rhymes were clever but not really PUNCHING and ATTACKING Jego enough in my opinion. As for Jego, he made up for things like wordplay and metaphors with being on the attack the majority of the verse. SO i gotta vote....

Jego.

Tag, hit up Meters vs. Unleashed Dragon
and Meters vs. Rhymes

If you have the time. Nice battle guys.

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

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above tags avatar is says: chinktastic


p.s.

im a white boy

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tag merked it once again keep puttin it down homie

Explain Vote Better... Gone.
-Axe

opener:tAG
closer:Tag
punches:tag
wordplay:tag
overall:tag

yo dawg are you dissin up black people in this?
the black peoples eggs and the twix

good battle dawg can u vote for this?
vote for this?:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95731

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