Fish can't fly and birds can't swim
but they can try by god they can try.

Benny lost a hundred grand at blackjack
so to get it back
He threw good money after bad.
He couldn't pay it back and got whacked

Some try to fix a house with fatal mold
Its just throwing good money after bad.
The family never grew old.
They are six feet under and cold.

Cheney threw our kids into the heart of Baghdad.
so we throw good bodies after bad.
Forgive me if your loved one is there.
But no one feels glad.

The pipelines are blown every week
Freedom be damned we've been had
The oil spills like an arterial leak
Stay the course they repeat.

Religion and polititians put on a show
with pride in every mangled corpse
with worse intentions after bad.
The dead and shredded are behind closed doors.

Forget who started it.
We will win this imminent dangerous war.
When every thug is dead, when all the oil is gone
or our mafia thinks with thier head.

Our 10,000 assembly line mini nukes
are advertised as the answer we need.
There is talk of our Constitution
as the enemy of corporate power and greed.

They won't ever speak of remorse
just stay on the God Damned course.
If you don't, they may kill you, its a fact.
Not with the courts but a tribunal patriot act.

We can swim, we can fly and we will fight them.
You need only try.

Wow very nice peice..

i liked the messages..

sometimes i try to think what the world and the us is thinking, have we all lost our minds?

war is so pointless and fighting is so pointless, we all live and we die end of story

anyway very nice drop

I liked this peice. You constructed this well. I am a diehard patriot, I love my country... here lately I've disagreed with it's leaders but will still stand behind it. Normally things like this get me fired up, I wanna fight back with something because I feel personally attacked. You didn't attack the patriot in me with this peice, you intellegently and poetically expressed your veiws gracefully, and if you knew me personally you would understand how hard it is to acomplish that. CONGRATS!! lol
At first I was unsure of the message, because the title drew me in I was like "Oh no, it's going to be too vague to understand" but it's like you prepped us, like a rollercoaster, but unsuspectingly. You pulled us up... some minor jolts but it's to be expected on a thrilling ride and we reach the leveling out right before the turn at:

"Some try to fix a house with fatal mold
Its just throwing good money after bad.
The family never grew old.
They are six feet under and cold"

The Cheney thing... when I first read it I thought it was a metaphore but reading it over again I realized "This guy is serious" and then I kept reading and it was like the pit of my stomach was being yanked here and there... and by the end I was yelling (not literally) it was a great read. Thrilled me, unsuspecting turns... great advancements of lines and technical points of writting... you're very talented... great drop

Thankyou v.much,

i wrote this in Media Studies whilst watching the shawshank redemption...........lol, Great film

Hm... Can't really say I can appreciate this peice.

I've read a lot of war-related scheiße and it's always been very similiar.

This peice got the same vibe as all the rest, I have to admit that first hand. I had no idea what the first part of it had to do with the anti-war stuff. Well, actually I can. I just have to really absorb it first.

Can't really think of much else to say. This isn't your best work. It wasn't a horrible bomb of any sort either, it just wasn't your best.

~Islam~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.